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By : Shaylilin
  • From tawanawelch on July 22, 2009
    LOL i loved the banter between Dei and Tachi in the bed.X3 Tama is was cocky wasnt he cuz i thought he wouldnt show up figuring they would trap him. I hope and pray he doesnt bribe someone on the trip to Boston. Hanabi i cant wait to find out her deal with Hinata and what of Neji? She was content to say that Hinata didnt do things with him. Im so happy about the names they came up with for their baby. Yes this ordeal seems to be winding down i sure hope so. Wow and ill always read ur stories theyre terrific and adventurous and sad and happy i love them so yes im still with u too now that ive caught up. :D Im so glad ur muse for ur originals is going strong, and life for u and ur family is kinda back to normal.:D
    Love ya!!X3
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  • From tawanawelch on July 22, 2009
    how positively freaky to know that someone is coming in and out of ur house so freely as to vandalize it and leave without a word. Poor Sasuke reverting back to earlier trauma just what the little tormentor wants. Damn >.< Tama is real good at tormenting i see i cant wait to see what more he'll do to them or what Hanabi thinks up next for her sister maybe.
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  • From tawanawelch on July 22, 2009
    Temari feels Zetsu? Whats the connection well i guess ill get that later.:) Wow Neji doesnt know that he and Hinata r cousins, nice plot twist.:D I love how u have so many characters incorporated in the story:D I got quite a scare when Naruto passed out. I thought for sure it was something serious. Thank goodness it isnt. Whew!! Tama and Hanabi working together is totally scary cuz she seems to have connections too. o.o
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  • From tawanawelch on July 22, 2009
    aww such a sweet and tender moment for them. Im so glad Naruto got to know the good news of Deidara and Zetsu. No wonder he was able to have such mind-blowing sex and especially after eating those ribs and the float.*sounds so delicious* I forgot Zetsu and his brother were teens so wow 'Barbie' really made a drastic change in appearance. He will definitely be undetected and who'dve thought Hanabi would be so against Hinata that she'd wanna team up with someone so brutal. o.o
    Yaaay Neji is in this!!! Gorgeous!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on July 22, 2009
    YES!!! Deidara got them Yaaay!!! Im so glad he gets his revenge for them making him cut off his hair wow and dying it black and red. o.o i know that looks pretty sexy actually lol. Now it seems the real trouble maker is still out there and knows how to push all the wrong buttons to continue this fiasco and to try and kill his "other half." Such excitement!!XD Then for Deidara to have found Kakuzu and Hidan in that position was icing on the cake lol
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  • From tawanawelch on July 22, 2009
    T___________T OMG i hope they find Deidara and that he's alright. I know that Kakuzu and Hidan can be pretty ruthless but i hope they havent found him. x.x Im glad to see Sasuke letting go of his emotions for his and Naruto's sake. Yaaay they're approved for being legally united. X3
    I love how u explained how the pregnancy is able to happen. I just loved that whole scene of Grammy night. Kiba's big head added to that.LOL
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  • From tawanawelch on July 22, 2009
    Im so happy to be getting back on track with this story.:D Im so excited for the announcement of the baby and how his fans will react to it. I still remember how i loved how protective Sasuke is over Naruto especially in his current state. I hope Obito and the guys can get to Zetsu.:( LOL Zetsu2 being called Barbie was so damn funny.XDD

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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 27, 2009
    Good chapter. I'm glad that they finally caught Tama. I hope that he doesn't successfully bribe anyone on the transportation team. I really want Tama to get what's coming to him.
    Keep going!
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  • From oliversangel on March 22, 2009
    OK, I can finally review now. Great chapter, I loved what Naruto wanted for breakfast. I actually wanted some too. LOL. All of it, together like him. LOL. Stupid depo, and stupid hormones. LOL. I am glad that Naruto's blood sugar has leveled out, and that he's less sleepy now. I was so sad when whatshisface messed up the pic, keyed the car and trashed their place. It took me a hot second to realize who he was, dense as I am. I loved how Naruto was able to keep calm until they got to Itachi's. My heart broke for the two of them. I really hope he doesn't kidnap Naruto. Cause I would have to bust some heads yo. Word. What's the dilly? Ye-yah!! What?! LOL. Sorry, don't know where that came from. Love you miss you, can't wait to read more.

    XXOO
    Ero

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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 07, 2009
    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - fayjay18 on January 29, 2009
    great story. one question,why couldn't sasuke be the one who got pregnant.
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  • From TheSimi on January 28, 2009
    Wonderful chapter! I love that Minato and Naruto are growing closer and I liked that Deidara is back. Tama is freaking me out, I really hope that he won't get his hands on Naruto...

    Thank yoou so much for this and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From oliversangel on January 28, 2009
    Awww, this one was WAF. LOL. I loved Baki's baby talk. And poor Nar, he's got gestational diabetes, and passed out, and no more crazy food? Awww, poor thing. He lives for eating, and eating weird junk, well, most of the time anyways. ^.^ And yay!! I'm glad Deidei is back, for at least a little while anyways. I wonder what Sasuke is going to do with Minato that Naruto can't be around for? Oh, BTW, loved Temari's joke to lighten the mood. LOL. Oh yeah, loved the fact that Sas, and Nar never considered the possibility of having a girl. That's very funny to me. I guess they really didn't pay any attention in biology. My poor grandma was blamed for having a million boys. ^.^ Oh man, I almost forgot about the plot against the Hyuugas. I think I spelled that wrong. Dang it all!! Well, I'm sure Itachi will be on top of things concerning Hinata. He won't allow another loved one to be taken from him. Kick ass chapter. I just know your muse is getting itchy to give us some conflict. ^.^
    XXOO
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 28, 2008
    Aw. I'm glad that things are looking up for our favorite couple. Great story by the way. I read the 1st one and was immediately hooked so I had to read this sequel.
    keep going!
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  • From missbri88 on December 28, 2008
    Well I saw this pop up a day or so ago and I said to myself, "Jade Rose? I think I heard of her before." So I just had to read Any Time the Fly before I read this story and I must say that isnt amazing. I think Im in love and the Mpeg was perfect. I do read some Mpegs but I find them stupidly funny, but this wasnt so. You came up with great reasoning and the love and care these two share is just beautiful. I cant wait to see more. But until next time; See ya's!!!
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