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By : sameyler
  • From tawanawelch on October 11, 2008
    Ok now I see what Gaara's upset about. Awww, I love Gaara being protective of his Naruto. I know I'd hate to be on his bad side.:) I really liked the first part of the epilogue of Forgotten. Loooove your lemons!!! Now, Sasuke got his warning from Gaara, he's really going to be after Naruto full force.XD We also know now why Naruto doesn't like guns.
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  • From AtticusNova on October 06, 2008
    ahhh perfect Sasuke is right Naruto would fight tooth and nail before he let any one do that to him. It would be war! hahaha. awesome up date's. epp the licking and kissing scenes so cute I love's them =3 I can't wait for more cuteness *hearts*
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  • From tawanawelch on October 06, 2008
    Oh yeah! I like that you're going to update on a particular day of the week. Gives us something to look forward to. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on October 06, 2008
    I think you said we will find out Gaara's involvement with Naruto later on, does that still hold true? Yeah, Itachi is bad trying to whore Naruto out for money for him. OMG!!! Sasuke's jealousy is just delicious!! Doew Shion have a crush on Naruto or is she just being nice and sweet??? So much going on, it's so exciting!!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on October 01, 2008
    Well, they've made headway rather nicely. It's a regular thing now and when Sasuke leaves early Naruto's sad. Awww, it's so cute. What does Itachi have planned?
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  • From tawanawelch on October 01, 2008
    Ooooh, Sasuke to the rescue YES!! Who's the woman? Is she just some random character for now? I'm glad you made Naruto able to handle himself in a fight and not some helpless weakling. So now the sparks are lit and Sasuke's almost to first base this is good.
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  • From AtticusNova on September 30, 2008
    aww this story is so cute I'm still giggling and smiling. I love Ino and her yaoi fangirlness hehe, and Naruto is awesome ^.^ I can't wait for an up-date =3
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  • From UzumakiLover on September 30, 2008
    Bang bang sasuke-kun! aww they almost had that magic moment you know, when sparks would have started flyin...ahh love. i crave it! hehe anyway, very good so far hope to keep reading more ^^
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  • From Halskr on September 30, 2008
    The part about getting treated hurt but not getting shot is so like Naruto. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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  • From tawanawelch on September 23, 2008
    So, it's Kiba ooooh. His boyfriend is Shino that's so cool. Now Kiba knows how to handle Shino and their relationship, thanks to Shino's friend Naruto. I like how you did that. Sasuke is thinking that Kiba's into Naruto(only because Kiba blew up at him). I can't wait for Sasuke to get to the shop and have Naruto alone.
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  • From tawanawelch on September 23, 2008
    Oh man, this was a funny chapter!!!!XD Naruto is so ridiculous. I can't wait to find out what he looks, you wrote his shirt was riding up. Does he look girl-sexy or still a man-sexy??? I can't wait to find out who he will be escorting around town.
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  • From UzumakiLover on September 18, 2008
    *squeal*
    so cute, Ino rocks on all levels hehe!
    I'm excited to see what happens when Sasuke goes to the
    shop the next day! Naruto's gonna be pissed.
    Awww Gaara and cookies! >////< super kawaii!!
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  • From tawanawelch on September 17, 2008
    OMG!! Where to start!? At first when Gaara talked about spending more time with Naruto you know I thought- Instant romance- until Naruto mentioned to Gaara how Neji was. Now I'm wondering who Iruka is talking about for Naruto to show around tomorrow. Is this the intro to another character like maybe Shino. Then Sasuke can fight over Naruto with Shino. Now, Ino's plan is definitely a nice one considering the person she's using is a very willing Sasuke. This has gotten really good really fast. Can't wait to see the next chapter.:)
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  • From primaggie on September 17, 2008
    haha, funny -
    iruka is naruto's mom (am i right?)
    poor naruto - he's really oblivious - when the author writes something it's the truth (naruto is a gay)
    update soon
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  • From spiritofthelost on September 15, 2008
    I'm going to assume that whatever word processing program you're using doesn't have a spell/grammar-check. I don't know if you've already got a beta or what, but if you want me to, I can do a quick run-through of your chapters to fix whatever mistakes I may come across.
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