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Reviews for Establishing Dominance

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  • From candycrys on September 23, 2008
    good lord all I have to say is "that it is good to be Naruto"

    love the new chappy and can't wait to read the next
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  • From ANON - Edo EroSennin on September 22, 2008
    =') Awesome, i fucking love you.

    The sex scenes are very hot, the story is good, and actually makes sense (well, as much sense as any hentai fanfic can haave anyway) and although i don't really like the Sakura hate, this fic is so good that i must say Burn The Witch.
    lol

    Anyway, thank you for writting this. =)
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  • From Draklin on September 22, 2008
    i stopped reading once you started bashing sakura, that alone makes your story not worth reading, you obviously didnt read very much into the manga if this is what you think of her.
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  • From Yamizenchou on September 21, 2008
    I'm rather curious as to whether you'll put all your more adult stories on here and if you'll still update them on ff.net. I still love this story though. Especially the Hana and Ayame scenes (they need to get more action), and the office scene in chapter 5.
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  • From Pinkney on September 20, 2008
    Thank you very much for the review! As you probably read in my story Naruto's Harem, Establishing Dominance was the inspiration for it. I read all the chapters in Establishing Dominance on fanfiction.net and I really hope that you add Kurenai into the harem, that would be awsome! If not that's cool too.

    I was also wondering, should I post my story on fanfiction.net? I was thinking about doing that. But I don't know. Anyway thank you for reading my story. I'm glad you liked it and I can't wait for you to finish Establishing Dominance as well as C&D. I'm also dying to see the next chapter of No Mercy and Dog's Fox. Again thank you for reading and giving me inspiration.


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  • From candycrys on September 19, 2008
    OHHH another great chappy of hot sex. Lucky, lucky girls
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2008
    :D... that's all I can say.
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  • From REM1985 on September 17, 2008
    This is a great story. Your choice of words and writing style are a bit odd sometimes but overall, I am really enjoying this tale. As of now he has Hinata, Anko, Ino, Tenten and Hana, in that order and within two chapters. I love the choices and the situatons are incredibly believable, though I would personally think that Anko could withstand a little more torture, even with Naruto's fox seduction. I am hoping that you plan on a little more story than what is currently present later on; don't get me wrong, I love the smut, but a story line is good too. Great job, and keep it going.
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  • From candycrys on September 16, 2008
    Yes Hana is in the mix and I'm happy that Temari will be in it. Great so far ^_^
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  • From thas on September 16, 2008
    very good! a few odd turns of phrase but good. please post again soon.
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  • From ShyTanith on September 16, 2008
    oh Kami! I think I died and went to Naruto fiction heaven! 3 Lemons in one chapter even Ero-sennin and Kakashi will be sporting nose bleeds
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  • From Verakum on September 16, 2008
    FUCK!!!!! IT WAS GREAT!... I LOVED IT.... even if sakura isnt there but no prob.... do some shadow clone sex... mmmm it was good... update soon
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  • From ANON - Gurlie on September 16, 2008
    Naruto's so bad! I'm still kinda blushing from reading this story. *Clears throat awkwardly*

    It's a pretty good story...BUT, I didn't like how you made Sakura out to be the one and only that doesn't like Naruto. Even if it was over Sasuke being killed. I'm guessing you don't like her, so I won't read any further since I'm not big on Sakura-bashing or antagonism.

    *Sigh* I prolly annoyed you, but I had to say somethin'. She's 1 of my fave characters after all! Gomen.

    Anyhow, this wasn't intended as a flame. I still think it's a good (and hawt) story. Keep up the great work! Ja ne.
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  • From Saitochan on September 16, 2008
    Oh man... this is some long shit. Sorry, but it's late and I just couldn't make it to the end. Have you ever thought of breaking it down in smaller chapters? I'm sure it would help the reading a lot.


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  • From candycrys on September 16, 2008
    Thank you, thank you, thank you.

    Would Temari and Kureni be in the harem?

    Can't wait for the next chappy ^_^

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