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Reviews for Breaking Free and Falling into the Arms of Love

By : Girlwithideals
  • From on October 11, 2008
    Aw.*sniffs* Poor Naruto!
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  • From ANON - AngelofDarkness&Despair on September 30, 2008
    Breaking Free and Falling into the Arms of Love is one of the most beautiful and saddest story that I've ever read. Don't listen to anyone that says that this story is crap, because their wrong. Love the story keep at, my only advice is to bring in Itachi. I LOVE Itachi. He can be like a really supportive brother when he wants to be for Naru
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  • From Shaylilin on September 28, 2008
    Wow, go Naruto. I'd be afraid to stand up to Sasuke.
    I'm glad he has Gaara and Shika.
    This story just stays good! Great job!
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  • From serenagold on September 28, 2008
    Oh my god!! O_O Sasuke is soooo going to punish Naruto. First for not waiting around for him after school, then not answering his calls and finally for not telling him where he was or who he was with!!! I mean I'm glad for Naruto for trying to avoid the bastard and seeking some independence, but oooo the next chapter... it will be so brutal!

    I dunno, you may have seen this chapter as boring because there wasn't much happening by way of sex, but damn if it wasn't a good chapter. Set up and tension are important and this one set up a lot.

    Keep up the great work!! ^^ Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on September 28, 2008
    Obviously there is a failure to communicate here. I said MORE!!! And yet its not long enough. I have become addicted and your cruelly refuse to supply me with the appropriate amount to satiate my fix. How could you?!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on September 28, 2008
    Yeah!!! Naruto is finally going agaisnt sasuke's wishes!!! I hope that doesn¡t get hi in too much trouble!
    I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ItaNarulover on September 28, 2008
    Yay! That's good Naru-chan, show Sasuke you're not his little slave! *cheers*
    This chapter was good as well and I can't wait for the next chapter to get updated.
    Damn Sasuke-bastard, I'll wait for your punishment....mohahahahahaaa...*evil laughter*
    .....Anyway..keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From lokivsanubis on September 28, 2008
    This story is well casted and interesting XD your take on each of the characters and the pairings they make shows great promise. But Neji will need to be more involved with Shika then just this "I need a cover story" type deal because his cannon character would never act that way since Neji is far to prideful, so its best he actually love Shika or at least show real interest in him for chapters to come.

    Gaara's a little too OC, he's so post to be a menacing Emo like character with little to no emotions, but your take on him is interesting and i personally like it. XD it makes him a much better match for an abused Naruto. So i approve of it and actually as a gaara fan cause me to enjoy this story a lot.

    I have a question- you mention itachi and yet we haven't seen him, is he an important character to this fanfic? If so can we see more of him because i'm sure he would know somethings up with Naruto and Sasuke. Because i find it hard to believe that Sasuke's been able to control Naruto this whole time and never slip once and have someone find out. (But i know this happens in real life situations so its believable.)

    Anyway over all your story has great potential. I hope that was the opinion you where looking for because i do like your story a lot. And feel it can be a great story in the future since i'm curious to see how Sasuke's going to react to Naruto suddenly standing up to him. XD I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From coldXrainX1891 on September 28, 2008
    I love this story! I seem to like Sasuke being evil....-_-'
    And this last chapter wasn't boring at all! I want to
    lknow what's gonna happen on onday at School for Naruto!
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  • From tawanawelch on September 27, 2008
    No, that was NOT boring you're just building up to an encounter with a pissed off Uchiha and extremely frightend Naruto. I am so scared for him, he is decidedly bold. I guess Gaara started driving to be with and sorta protect Naruto from his brother. I want Gaara and Naruto to hook up so bad. I can't wait to see what you have planned. I'm glad Neji is making friends with the crew. I hope he and Shika get together soon. I really like this story. I also hope Sasuke can get some serious help. I'll be looking for the next update.
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  • From ANON - yaoifan on September 25, 2008
    love it i need more chapters plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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  • From ANON - animelover on September 24, 2008
    awww, what a neat story! gaanaru is my fave second only to itanaru. keep up the good work! oh, and i can't WAIT to see sasuke's butt handed to him.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on September 24, 2008
    I really like this story!
    I am looking forward for the next chapter!!
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  • From Rockyshores on September 22, 2008
    I really like this, please continue!
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  • From serenagold on September 22, 2008
    Keep up the good work!
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