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Reviews for Hot Water and Hot Guys

By : holywyvern
  • From arabuzumaki on September 21, 2008
    wow chapter 3 wow. lol when you said kinky you really meant it. i was afraid to look at my screen lol, i was blushing like a crazed fangirl lol.
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  • From ANON - eve4mem on September 21, 2008
    ^_^ I loved the Iruka action very much!! It wasn't a lot but it made a big impression can't wait to see if you use him again. Sai and Naruto were to dang hot for words.
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  • From nekluvshp on September 16, 2008
    Seme Sai!!! So hot!!! So many stories I've read are with uke Sai and its nice to see him on top for once!! Hope to see more awesome chapters and more hot sex!! Here's a suggestion: Bondage and blindfolds!!!
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  • From ANON - hunter on September 16, 2008
    awsome really i like how you got sai to show his emotions a littel and you should tottally do one were naruto makes sai the best begging ass slave in thew world
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  • From ANON - eve4mem on September 16, 2008
    That was hot!
    I don't really like Sasuke but Sai is great. Can't wait to see more of what you have for these two.
    If you're taking request may I suggest an Iruka pairing. I don't really care who he's with as long as he's paired with a hot male seme. Uke Iruka is my guilty pleasure.
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  • From ANON - hunter on September 15, 2008
    make another chap please i love seme naruto and no one else does fro some fucking reason but this was hot pplease write more
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  • From tealeavesgreen on September 14, 2008
    Umm... 12 inches? Seriously? A foot long? I have a couple of problems with that. First of all, how the hell would he know how long he was? Did he jack off and then grab a ruler before he orgasmed, or what? Secondly, if he's got a 12-inch penis, he really ought to go talk to a doctor about it or something, because that's not natural. The average size of the adult erect male penis is slightly over five inches. FIVE. And really, in your experience, have you ever had sex with anyone who had a foot long penis? Wikipedia has an article with a graph on average penis size. nine inches is freakishly long, and the chart stops there because no one is longer than that, unless they have a serious medical condition like elephantitis.

    I can almost buy Naruto measuring himself. Almost. I can't buy him having a footlong erection. If you feel you absolutely have to give numbers, at least keep it somewhat realistic. I instantly pictured a very comical giganto-penis sprouting out of Naruto's pants every time he got turned on, and started giggling madly. I don't think giggles were quite the emotion you were trying to invoke in your readers.

    Other than that, it seems like an okay story. Naruto kinda sounds like a slut, but if that's how you interpret his character, so be it. You certainly have creative license to manipulate the characters and their personalities as you will. But no more five-dollar-footlong penises, please.
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  • From ANON - miki on September 14, 2008
    Very hot. More SaixNaruto please.
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  • From ANON - miko on September 14, 2008
    damn that was hot!!!!! i would love another chapter!

    anyways have a great week!

    laters! ~_^

    miko
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  • From Prism0467 on September 14, 2008
    Come on, show Sai some love...why did Naruto have to call out Sasuke's name? I'm guessing Sai thought he had found his nirvana until that happened. That blows, and not in a pleasant way!

    Please make it right in the next chapter...pretty please?
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