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Reviews for The Power of Youth... and Love

By : RichardH
  • From Archfiend on September 15, 2008
    Well, this and the last chapter did seem kind of rushed and the lemon scene too. Anyway the yuri was excellent and I did have to laugh at the Godaime´s antics. hiashi is gonna flip and I do hope you will describe it in a funn way, for that should certainly be a highlight to come. Please update soon will you.
    P.S.: so saying "arse" it kind of ruined it a bit for me. (personal, subjective opinion!!)
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  • From rxtechgirl on September 14, 2008
    LOL yay smut! More, please! *giggles*
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  • From ShouraiChan on September 13, 2008
    Kawaii! I really like it, please keep up the great work!
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  • From Archfiend on September 13, 2008
    Thank you that you are not angry at me, and it is much better than before. Of course I want to see the InoxSakura scence, hell yeah!. I also hope that we will have a bit of plot too in the story though this chapter was certainly nice. Shikamaru and Temari, those two had me smiling.Also a very nice move to put them into Suna, that gives the naruxhina romance a better chance, seeing as there is no interference from outsiders there. I hope you update soon, and i am untrigued in how you will write the lemon scences.
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  • From rxtechgirl on September 13, 2008
    Nice! I always love a good Naruto x Hinata. More please! LOL
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  • From Archfiend on September 12, 2008
    look, the idea is quite nice and the story has it`s amusin points, thouh seriously check the spelling will you, I mean it just drags down the rating and the fun. otherwise nice story and well..., they move quite fast don´t they.(Hope you throw in a SakuraxIno scene!!) otherwise please update will you.
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