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Reviews for I Never Saw

By : Ordained
  • From teasetillyoudrop on August 22, 2009
    I don't usually like one shots since they leave me begging for more but damn, that was hilarious. |D

    Especially Sasuke's yearbook comment. I could imagine him putting that on an oblivious idiot's yearbook. Be his abrasive self to sorta hide his confession.

    BTW... Sasuke's bj explanation thingy... xD
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  • From riddlestar on September 13, 2008
    LOL>. hilarious!! and both are totally IC. i loved it.
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  • From maggiekebs on September 12, 2008
    Lol... I loved it!
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  • From Aikotina on September 11, 2008
    i enjoyed this very much! sequel! sequel! Please?! *cute-puppy-dog-eyes-with-glitter*
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  • From ladygizarme on September 10, 2008
    Ooh, this was good. Could use a once-over from a beta, for a few typos, but overall it was immensely enjoyable! I love stuff like this told from Sasuke's POV.

    my favorite lines:

    Fuck you

    It was Sasuke’s turn for a satisfied smile, and he added at the bottom as an afterthought:

    Love Sasuke    ff (haha, that is so sasuke. much love) also:

    Tsk. All his alone attempts paled in comparison to this mastery of the hand. Henceforth Sasuke would make Naruto do this whenever they were together. Yes, that would be nice. (NICE, yes very) and:

    Getting a hard-on from ‘Neddy the Purple Elephant goes for a walk’ might be a hard one to explain. (LMAO, yeah, just a BIT)

    it'd be AWESOME if you made a second part with Sasuke getting properly screwed on a bed. XD ^_~




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  • From Prism0467 on September 08, 2008
    Fun stuff.
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  • From fadezaway on September 08, 2008
    Wow. And when can we be expecting part II? ;) Gotta tell us what happens their first time in a proper bed, hehe...
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  • From Kimra on September 08, 2008
    nice :D
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on September 08, 2008
    This would be a nice one to have a sequel?? bats long eyelashes... cause it's just great fun! Thank you!
    Slave
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  • From squirrelc on September 08, 2008
    I loved your story and that poem is one of my favorites one that is better is what
    Gelett Burgess said about it
    "Cing Ans Apres"
    Ah, yes! I write the "Purple Cow"
    I'm Sorry, now, I Wrote it!
    But I can Tell you, Anyhow,
    I'll Kill you if you Quote it!

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