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Reviews for Dirt and Grime: A Twisted Fairy Tale

By : lexjamandme
  • From lara5170 on September 07, 2015
    This was good but a bit twisted at the last minute. I almost wish it was longer so I could find out if one of the pigs (Sakura/Ino) was going to take the devils deal.
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  • From ANON - Serenity on May 29, 2012
    I do really enjoy all your twisted fairy tales, and putting Itachi as the devil, very nice touch. I don't think I'd ever read that story but I have heard of it before, I like your twist on it.

    Thanks for sharing!

    p.s. wow this is the first time i've been able to leave a review here, i think ever...nice.
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  • From Dreamfool on February 16, 2009
    I don't know if you still read reviews for this story but I'm gonna review anyway.
    That was a "devilishly" beautiful story. It was it was familiar enough to be comforting but unique enough to be interesting. It gives me hope for my own twisted Naruto fairytale. Thank you for a beautiful story and giving me hope to write my own.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 12, 2009
    What a wonderful story! I couldnt stop reading, even when I needed to get to bed for class! I am a fan of yours, and have enjoyed all works I have read thus far. Please, continue to astound us all with your amazing tales! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - -xyz- on December 17, 2008
    THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!!!!!!

    I love your humour and the story is hilarious.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Kismet on October 14, 2008
    I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was definitely better than the original. More detail and better characters.
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  • From ANON - klen77 on September 24, 2008
    Wow your stories are still the best ones!!!!!!!
    No one else can descripe their characters as good as you! (even in a fairytale)
    I love your fics everyone of them, i hope you write another one soon.
    Maybe a Mpreg again ;-)

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  • From ANON - devious lil devil on September 20, 2008
    that was an awesome read, lex. keep up the great work. I look forward to reading your next fic.

    ~Devious
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  • From pumbaaaa on September 14, 2008
    I do believe that is the oddest piece of fiction I have ever read, and thats really all I have to say. Don't ask me if that is a good thing or a bad thing, because I honestly don't know!
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  • From ANON - lo on September 14, 2008
    This was a lot of fun to read. Nice work!
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  • From Imagy on September 13, 2008
    yes.
    I am sure the original did not have a extremely raunghy and passionate-filled ending
    not that I read the original
    based upon what I've heard of The Brothers Grimm, and their tales
    and the tone of the first half of your story
    I don't think I really want to
    at least, not right now
    loved it, though ^O^
    you're fics are always worth reading~

    ~Nikki
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  • From sakuyalove on September 11, 2008
    Good read. I absolutely loved the ending, "Girls, do I have a deal for you." Go Itachi!!!
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  • From Lechan on September 11, 2008
    I LOVE YOU! Have I said that before? I thinkI have.... Oh well, I absolutly adore this fic. It is the best one yet, but then again I am so very adicted to the BRother's grim and thier darker fables. I loved how you wrote this and believe it or not they were in charater excet now I wonder what those other details were? The money perhaps? Anywho, My favorite line, and the thing that probably made his so dear to me was the ending where Itachi walks up and says, "Ladies... do I have a deal for you..." LOL I could just see Sakura's hell Ino's face as hey Saw Itachi and fell over eachother to take up his offer. then the ending like, "most of them lived happily ever after" it racked me up. Oh, thank you for writting this, it made my day. seriously, I was having the day from hell and this made it all good again, so thank you. And as always two thumbs WAY WAY up.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on September 11, 2008
    awww that was sweet.
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  • From Kimra on September 10, 2008
    Awesome! :D

    Loved the story! Am totally late for work now, but loved the story! :D
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