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Reviews for Dirt and Grime: A Twisted Fairy Tale

By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - darkmousy on September 10, 2008
    you, my dear, are one of my favorite fanfic authors of this genre!!!!!
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  • From Jelp on September 10, 2008
    LOL...most of them lived happily ever after...hahaha...

    Excellent ending. I think it's funny that Jiraiya realized who Sasuke was before Naruto did. Then again, Naruto was too busy pining. If he had listened to Sasuke hadn't been pining, I'm sure he would have realized what was going on! Then again, it wouldn't have been as funny if Sakura and Ino had figured out that that was Sasuke too early.

    Good story! ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Briryan on September 10, 2008
    That was a good story! Loved how you had Itachi seem not to care, but on the inside he was pissed. So funny. Happy that Sasuke and Naruto got together at the end:-) Loved how you put Itachi in at the end of the story, so good.
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  • From Zrina on September 10, 2008
    Yay!! I love a good fairy tale and that was the best!! Although I never remembered any of them from my childhood having that much porn in them.... too bad...

    Really, really good! I absolutely loved it!! XDD
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  • From Jelp on September 09, 2008
    Wow...excellent. Just excellent so far. I'm really looking forward to the next part. I can't help but wonder what will happen. Will Sasuke make it to the end of his seven years? Will he leave now, which will probably leave Naruto very heart broken? Will he come back, looking suave and sexy as we are used to seeing him and having Ino and Sakura get upset with themselves? Aaaah! So many things could happen...I might check out the story that you took it from, or I might not as I am sure it's different and may or may not have the same ending. So I'll wait to read it till this is finished.

    Again, looking forward to the next part! ~ Jelp
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  • From Kimra on September 08, 2008
    But but but... it didn't finish... *sulk*
    :D Please write the rest!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2008

    AHHHHH! Another story from Lexjamandme! SO INTENSE!

    I couldn't get enough of the first chapter. This is not only so original but it's funny, captivating and sooo well-written. I absolutely love your writng style. You still reamain one of the best SasuNaru fanfiction writers of all time. I love the way you make Naruto and Sasuke understand each other. Poor poor Sasuke. And what a cliffie!

    I'm so looking foreward to the next chapter! Please please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Damp on September 08, 2008
    lol, I never though of turning a Brother's Grimm story into a SasuNaru, but I must say, this is funny (and awesome) I love it!
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  • From Raelyn on September 08, 2008
    So, Itachi's the devil, huh? Poor, poor weasel.

    By the fourth paragraph, I was laughing out loud. Beyond the humor and fluffiness, you raised a very good question; if an Uchiha loses his dignity and no one sees it, is he still an Uchiha? Hmm...this will likely take many hours of intense contemplation, I best get started on that now. It will give me something to do while I anxiously wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on September 08, 2008
    Wonderfull chapter. Can't wait to see what Sasuke will say to Naruto, about him wanting to marry him. That should be interesting. Really looking forward to the next chapter. If possible, could you please email me when you next update? Please and thank you.
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  • From ANON - THoltz on September 08, 2008
    This story seems so... cool, I don't think I've ever read a story like it. I can't wait to see what you do with it. :)
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  • From TheSimi on September 08, 2008
    Amazingly wonderfully brilliant!!!!! I can't wait to read the continuation!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on September 08, 2008
    very interesting. tell me more
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  • From despairs on September 08, 2008
    Oh i love this! Naruto must already love Sasuke so much, he looks past the grime and filth to see the person that Sasuke is inside. WOW.
    lol i liked it when he dumped that bowl of soup on top of Sakura's head, she truly deserved it too. Both her and Ino will regret talking
    down at Sasuke when his true appearance is finally revealed..and then they will of course want him but it's too late bitches! He is Narutos!

    Thank you for not making this a sad, dark tale of Woe.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2008
    Now, some might wonder, if an Uchiha loses his dignity in the forest where no one can see him, is he still an Uchiha?


    Hahaha that was a brilliant line, loved it.
    No bathing for 7 years?! I'm shocked Sasuke could go 7 hours without a bath, let alone 7 years lol.
    Ah but this story is very different and interesting so far, looking forward to reading the rest of it.
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