Click Here!

Reviews for Alternative Education

By : Ljiljana
  • From ANON - mmartini on May 12, 2010
    Thank you! It was a great story, great insight both to the caracter's soul and the working of Homes. Thanks again! *chu*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lead_maiden on lj on January 31, 2010
    Form what I understand this story was supposed to be therapeutic in a sense, and I am very glad it grew into as many chapters as it did. It is a rough diamond that at times had awkward sentence structure and sylistic mishaps. I have read the story 3 times at least and, actually, wouldn't mind proofreading /editing it for you now that it is finished if you are at all interested. Also, I do belive an epilogues might be in order-whenever you feel like it, of course. There are simply plot lines that remained untied - Sakura, Sai and exactly how their togetherness manifests itself for Sasuke and Naruto.
    Report Review

  • From Prism0467 on January 26, 2010
    *Raucous applause* YAY!
    Report Review

  • From fuuton on January 12, 2010
    I adore this story ♥ please don't give up on it! You write it so well, sometimes I reread chapters.
    Report Review

  • From emochickenbutt on November 24, 2009
    interesting! original (especially compared to other fics on this site) i like the way you've dealt with each of their issues, too; like how Sasuke's family is set up and each of the supporting characters fit in smoothly. the POVs are also well done. good job so far and keep it up! i'm excited for the next chapter :)
    Report Review

  • From Paradox13 on November 09, 2009
    I have loved every bit of this story. This chapter it was really great that Naruto and Sasuke went that final step together, it would have been even better to have the details, but luckily I have a vivid imagination. I am not really sure what is up with Kabuto, but now I am really curious, beans and a whip? No matter how long between your chapters, this story is so well done, I just fall right back where you left off. I will miss it when its over and most likely will re-read once its finished.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2009
    That part with the beans reminded me of a part in the movie The Secrete Life of Bees where Dakota Fanning had to sit on grits for an hour and it left her knees all bloody...(girts are a type of mushy breakfast usually eaten in the southern U.S., but when they are not cooked they are corse and feel like sand)...I hope Naruto does not get in trouble so glad Kabuto got what was coming that bastard!!
    Report Review

  • From on November 08, 2009
    Zdravo! Nisam znala da si iz Srbija, lijepo znati. This chapter was wonderful (as always). Please don't throw Naruto in jail, plzplzplz. He only wants what's best for the kids :( and now that he finally got Sasuke......
    Report Review

  • From DevilLived on November 01, 2009
    Cliff hanger much? Awesome chapter- awesome story! I am officially hooked on your writing. Can't wait for more~
    Report Review

  • From electrostatic on October 21, 2009
    I remember reading this fic then my computer go a virus and the internet started fucking and so on.
    I just found this fiction today, again.

    I honestly don't care if Sasuke makes up with Itachi or his father, I just want to see him with Naruto. Happy and in love.
    The same with Naruto. Only I really want him to catch that pervert :@

    Sorry for the sucky review but I really should sleep, I've got a test tomorrow :(
    Im going to re-read this from chapter 1 sometime soon so I'll remember what Sakura-incident and so on haha :(

    Keep up the good work!
    Please update soon!!!

    Report Review

  • From zanax on September 15, 2009
    I love this story :D

    2 more chapters remaining? I hope you do a sequel!

    Can't wait, update soon!
    Report Review

  • From chibialichan on September 15, 2009
    oh wow this is such a great story. i am so glad that you have decided to continue it and add a plot to it in the process. as much as i don't want this story to end in the next chapter or two, can't wait to see what happens next. on that note, if possible, can you email me at kairna3@yahoo.com when you do update so that i won't miss it. many please and thank yous, with a plate full of cybercookies as a bribe (wait, did i just say bribe, i meant for being the bestest authoress ever!)

    ps.. although i do really love this story, and i really really hope you don't take offense, because i only add this little bit because i do love this story so much, and now i am just babbling, but there is this one minor little detail that has been bugging me and that is that throughout this story, instead of using the word 'sat' as in 'so-and-so sad somewhere,' you have been using the word 'set'. i know that it is only a one letter difference, but it is a difference. and if you want, i'll even help you go back and fix them all. know that like i said, i only say this because i love this story and hopefully you don't take any offense to me making these corrections. and now that i have babbled all that, i gotta go hide in my closet from the authoress... -hides-
    Report Review

  • From amnestria on September 14, 2009
    At least, Sasuke accepted his feelings and don't fight his attraction for Naruto anymore. I can't wait for the next chapter and see who is at the door ^^ Good work ^^
    Report Review

  • From suzannecmc on September 14, 2009
    so mean...a cliff-hanger;P

    enjoyable as always.
    thank you for your lovely writing.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rose on September 14, 2009
    OMG!!! I loved it. Sasuke is so... god hes just so perfect I can't stop gushing over him. I like Sasuke in this, how he struggles with his family and his own inhibitions. He is finally coming into his own and you write it beautifully. Everytime I read this I fall into it more and more. Its just so realistic to me. I can see this happening. I love how you can see the change occuring in Sasuke in slow increments, the way it should be. Naruto is also fantastic. He has his hero complex but hes also just Naruto and he fits well into this story. I think its wonderful how you've graduated the both of them into knowing that they want each other and being willing to go for it in subtle ways that people really use to get what they want when they don't want to just come out and say it. Your characters are so real. I know english isn't your first language, but I just wanted to mention that the errors in some places sort of ruin the groove one gets going when reading these stories. It doesn't completely distract from the story but it does cause little hiccups that take your attention away from the story. Other than that this chapter was perfect. I love how it moved the storyline forward even though not that much happened really. Anyway, I'll quit gushing and just say I look forward to the next chapter immensely.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!