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Reviews for The Hunting Ground

By : Ljiljana
  • From ANON - SasuNaruFan on October 09, 2008
    In regards to your last author's note, take your story down and do something else then. Life's too short. Don't waste your time if you would rather be doing something else, and don't waste our time by posting your half-assed shit on this site and then threatening to remove it just because readers aren't tripping over themselves to review your fic.

    You don't know if people are reading your story? What about the hits counts? What about the ratings? What about all the reviews you received earlier? Who are these people, nobodies? Thought so... it's not about knowing whether people are reading your story, either you just want an excuse to drop your story or you're a review whore. Either way, it'll be better if you just take your story down and stop posting your fics here unless YOU really want to. Sure there will be some readers who cater to your hostage fic tactics, but a lot of us will just stop reading you.

    For the record, I have NOTHING against your fic. I have no doubt that your story would continue to kick ass if you continued to write it, but I'd rather you stop posting entirely and lurk or leave AFF archives alone instead of wasting my time. There are other things I could be doing besides reading junk stories pulled right before the plot is fleshed out.

    Your a egomaniac shit-head for thinking that it's only your time which matters.
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  • From MiraMira on October 09, 2008
    TT-TT Nooo~~ don't end the story already~~~ *cries* please continue! Actually, could you please e-mail me when you do update? My e-mail's keitaros_kero_neko at yahoo dot com

    Thanks a bunch!
    Please update soon~
    Miranda
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  • From Rlcsbunny on October 08, 2008
    I for one like this story alot. It has a bit more plot than most, and that is very refreshing so please do continue.
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  • From Kimra on October 08, 2008
    Wow I'm totally reading this. It's brilliantly written and I'm on the edge of my seat regarding character interaction (I'm also wanting to, you know, find out who the killer is and all that... but I admit charcter interation wins me over the most).

    Love the story! Please don't stop writing! I swear if you keep writing this I'll even pick up a pen and write something for you - anything! But... maybe that's not much of an incentive :P but I have to try my hardest anyway! So the offers there if you want :) and if you keep writing this awesome story! Cheers!
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  • From JCooper on October 08, 2008
    Oh my, why hadn't I noticed this story before?

    I really enjoy your writing style and your characterizations are very well-developed. I'm so interested to see how this is going to turn out. Unlike most crime-fics I've read, I've seen three chapters and I haven't firgured out what's going to happen yet.
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  • From Halskr on October 08, 2008
    I really want to see this continued, so I will review it on multiple forums!!

    I really like the story and as I stated before the intrigue level on this is what draws me to it. But, I do have a problem with this because its a future fic. There is allot of time it seems between events in the anime and manga versus when this story takes place. Apparently, Naruto is the seventh Hokage and at some point Sasuke returned to Konoha. That leaves a large gap of information that the readers doesnt know which leaves us questioning the characters actions. We need background information. What are the circumstances involved in Sasuke's return? How long are we talking here? things like that. What is the source of friction between Sasuke and Naruto? Is it just his defection, did he attack Konoha, or did something occur after he returned between them?
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  • From ANON - Nadene on October 08, 2008
    ME READ! ME LOVE!

    PLEASE DONT STOP!!!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 08, 2008
    did I miss reviewing last time... cause I really like the plot of this... except I really want to know what S and N's pasts together are.... hmmm darn that writer withholding thing... cause I NEVER use that.. nope.
    don't stop... I might have to harm you... think nerf pats and frogs... or crickets.
    Slave
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  • From dolphina23 on October 05, 2008
    Well done, as always. Waiting to read more.
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  • From Kimra on September 19, 2008
    Yay. More please. :D
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  • From dolphina23 on September 19, 2008
    Hee, hee, hee! I like it and NO I'm not being biased. You know how I feel about your work. This chapter, even though I've already seen it, is no different. Cheers to your version of Naruto and Sasuke and I can't wait to see what you do with whatever it is sealed inside that building. I also can't wait to see what happens when the dynamic between Naruto and Sasuke changes! Keep going! :)
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  • From Mija on September 06, 2008
    aaaccckkk I am thinking I need MORE, please??? this is soo good so far and its like the FIRST chapter, there is so much in it yet not, I havent caught up to the manga so if its canon I wouldn't know some of the things that are supposed to be, all I know is I LIKE this, why is Sasuke and Naruto NOT talking?? I cant think I Naru NOT talking to Sasuke, it just seems weird, and the killer?? ooh wow, someone whos killing genins?? little kids?? poor things, and I think Hinata would make a great leader of the police department, I think she would be fair and just regardless of clan or what not, I must have more, I soo hope you write more soon, I cant wait, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From serenagold on September 05, 2008
    This story was very good. The set up was unexpected but very well done. I think is really interesting that Naruto, now as Hokage, still has not forgiven Sasuke's betrayal. I'm also fascinated to find out whats been going on with the blonde. You've created a really good set up and I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From Kimra on September 05, 2008
    Absolutely awesome! Brilliant use of perspective. I hope you write more, because I would love to read it. :D
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  • From dolphina23 on September 05, 2008
    You already know how I feel about this story. My curiosity is still peaked and as for comfort . . . !! I have sent you an e-hug! Don't worry so much about it being Sasuke's point of view or that it's a ninja story. I think this is a good start and I'm sure it will only get better. Of course, I'd like to know how and why Sasuke appears in the village again, but I'm sure that will be cleared up in time and I'll wait for it . . . with pleasure.
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