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Reviews for The Hunting Ground

By : Ljiljana
  • From ANON - tad on October 16, 2008
    a mystry i like - hope for more
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  • From ItaNarulover on October 12, 2008
    I really like this fic, it's awesome.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From Meikyuu on October 10, 2008
    Thank you sooo much for allowing your readers to review you without a review-gun pointed at their head x___x Even so, you have nothing to apologize for because ungrateful readers suck! Maybe now you'll get the acknowledgment you deserve. If you don't get a lot of reviews, please remember that some of us still greatly appreciate your stories! *hug*

    This story is even better than In the Mountains! *heart* Your writing style is really maturing.
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  • From kinai26 on October 10, 2008
    This is a very interesting story. I am not to fond of Sasuke in this fic - he´s very arrogant but it makes it more real I guess, but I still like your story a lot.
    I am looking forward to read the next part - I suspect that Itachi, Shisui... or the missing female jounin has something to do with this - you have a loyal reader in me XD
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  • From ANON - Rachel on October 10, 2008
    I very much am following the story, and very much love it. I'm positive there's going to be a lot more sad faces other than just myself if you quit writing. You're wonderfully descriptive, create a strong sense of characters and weave a detailed and highly intriguing plot.
    Do please continue, I know I'll be looking forward to the next update.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 09, 2008
    you have my attention. do continue
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  • From ANON - Paige Taylor on October 09, 2008
    Me again!! Just reading your past reviews and just want to say.... SasuNaruFan that was harsh!! Who says being a review whore is a bad thing....ever!! If it puts you off that much don't read and don't review!!

    Anyways... my main point..don't let it get to you Cupri!! This story is awesome so far you have to keep going!!

    P.S

    Is it possible to bribe you with virtual chocolate chip cookies?
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  • From ANON - Paige Taylor on October 09, 2008
    Ive just found this story!!! Im reading it and loving it!!!! Keep going!!!
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  • From cheiva on October 09, 2008
    I love this fic and cant wait fot the next ch. hope u update soon ^^
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  • From Pomona on October 09, 2008
    I am reading this, really! I am enjoying the mystery and tension in the last chapter.. the cliffhanger is a bitch, though.

    so if you want to do some other things in future don't forget about this one- and 'Collision' too! ;)
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  • From Allys on October 09, 2008
    I guess now was a good time to get out of my lurking funk. What else are you trying to do with your free time??? Cause I guess we can't really stop you, sadly enough. But I enjoyed the chapter immensely. Especially the one on one time between our boys that was positively littered with sexual tension. Naruto has a funny way of courting in this story, and Sasuke is strangely oblivious. It's enough to make me grin like an idiot XD. And it looks like you're building a really good mystery. I love when authors can write 'mysteries' well. Very few can or at least very few do, so I'm looking forward to this even more because of that. On a random note I wanted to hug the little Nara kid, he's such a smart cookie XD. I hope you keep writing this *Hugs*
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  • From ANON - mscs on October 09, 2008
    I enjoyed it so far! I like the attention to detail and that you don't rush the story. I'm really looking forward to more!! me
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  • From Allys on October 09, 2008
    I'm liking this more and more as I go along. Is this your first ninjaverse fic?? It's really good! I love your Naruto. he's so casually amazing XD. The little things like him being able to hide his chakra signature and then Sasuke throwing him all out of whack. The business of the dust, and him blowing up about the seal. Which I liked your interpretation of btw. Sasuke is also really mature in this story and considerate and it's making me so happy. I'm really excited about this story now!
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  • From Allys on October 09, 2008
    Wow... I've been meaning to read this for ages, well since I first saw it anyway. So far I'm highly intrigued. I was pretty shocked by the fact that Sasuke and Naruto aren't friends, especially since Naruto seems to be at the root of it, but I can tell it's complicated. Personally I think it's a really cool twist on a familiar scenario, by that I mean Sasuke's return to Konoha, the rest of the plot looks damned interesting and original. I've read way to many NaruSasuNaru stories to find much originality of plot anymore, but this is definitely the first time I've seen a murder investigation in Konoha dealt like this. And the angle of the Police station and Uchiha conspiracy and involvement is awesome XD. And OMG... "No more late night walks and pretty boys for you until the case is closed. Clear?" *Face fault and blinks*. someone's a little jealous maybe?? *crosses fingers* XD. That came out of nowhere and I LOVED it!!! The tension was ripe throughout the entire briefing but that just cinched it. I'm looking forward to reading the rest XD. 2 more chapters to go before I have to wait for an update. Yay!! XD.
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  • From Aikotina on October 09, 2008
    waa! i'm reading! i can't have reviewed before, cause i just found your story today! but i love it! its well written and the plot seems well thought out! you've got me hooked! please don't stop!
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