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Reviews for The Hunting Ground

By : Ljiljana
  • From dolphina23 on January 21, 2009
    What the heck? AFF.net killed my review! So, let's try this again. I liked the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto in this chapter. I also liked the bits with Granny and Naruto, as if she was angry at him for, what . . . not letting Sasuke become a girl? I hope it doesn't mean a sex-change, or worse, m-preg, for this story. But I'm intrigued enough to want to find out. I also wonder, though I have a pretty good guess, what the Uchiha planned on using the demon for. I hope you can update soon. I'm anxious as to who has died in Konoha and what Sasuke knows, or thinks he knows, about why the demon was let loose or escaped and what it has to do with the Uchiha. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on January 21, 2009
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    GASP! Holy, my god this story is absolutely AMAZING!

    Everything, everything about this story is just so well written. The plot and *cough* plot devices are just so well thought out and interesting. It has really captured my attention. Also I like the way you chose how to write Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. They were a bit wary and unfriendly towards eachother in the beginning yet now they are warming up to eachother. It just seems so realistic!

    And I especially love the way you portrayed their first time. It wasn't that romantic or anything like that but it was raw and neccessary. It also broke off some of the tension that lingerered between them. Now they can build their relationship from there! HEHE. Plus...it was damn hot.

    All the subtleties and nuances you put into your story are fantastic. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - kimra on January 21, 2009
    I love this story. it's great to read. :D Hope you write more soon. sorry for the really bad review. I wish I could say more than just how awesome your story is, but currently thats all I can think off. :D
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  • From viviangel on January 12, 2009
    the story is amazing please continue update soon because i am dying to know what happens. kisses and best wishes.
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  • From ANON - riddlestar on January 11, 2009
    *grin* i love this story! ^_^ update soon~
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  • From ANON - Kimra on January 08, 2009
    I love this story. :D

    Yay for the smex. Hopefully it gets more emotional or... connected after this. :D
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  • From Bluesrabbit11 on December 23, 2008
    Love the story, please continue soon!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 22, 2008
    well that was certainly interesting. never thought of sex like that before
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  • From Allys on December 22, 2008
    Awww *hugs U* The sex was perfectly perfect for what it was. It could hardly be a mind blowing experience when one was exhausted and neither of them was really comfortable with it. I actually think you did marvelously well. It would have been really easy to just gloss over all the realism and write a normal lemon, but you did it the hard way, the right way, and I think the story is all the better for it. LOL, and I actually thought it pretty hot despite all the necessary awkwardness. I loved the little chakra swirls. And I'm extremely happy that Naruto didn't just "fall into his arms". I'm even more impressed with Sasuke cause he actually wouldn't have minded the sex, but he kept Naruto's feelings in consideration and didn't let himself get carried away, so kudos XD. Thank you so much for the update sweetie, I personally thought it was wonderful, and the fact of "where do they go from here" is going to be even more wonderful. LOLZ I love the drama. *snicker* God, they were being spiteful at points - "Yes, Hokage-sama" and when Naruto said he wasn't one of Sasuke's alley boys O.O *Dies*. So awesome XD.
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  • From Allys on December 06, 2008
    *Blinks* ... I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! LOL, XD. That's so excellent!!! I am now officially Ridiculously excited about the next chapter *chuckles Evilly* And surprising, not just because of the sex XD. I just really Really wanna see Naruto's reaction to this proposal XD. I think it's gonna be Awesome LOL XD *Glomps u* And Yeah the sex is like Icing!!! I'm really Adoring how this story is shaping up. I like your reasoning behind Kyuubi's actions and how the seals ties in and Sasuke's little moment of brilliance that could actually benefit the entire village is too cool for school!! LOOL XD (I'm such a nerd). Anyway, that the perfect ending to my week from hell! I'm actually relaxed and excited now. Thank you!! I'm going to be bouncing on the edge of my seat until the next chapter comes out!!! *Loves All over you and your awesome self* ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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  • From dolphina23 on December 05, 2008
    Well, I've said it before but this chapter is wonderful. I liked the Sasuke/Naruto interaction especially. It's on a wider scale than before and gives more insight into their rekindled relationship and the trust barriers they still have to cross. I really like what appears to come next too! Hot sex! Yeah! Keep it up!
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  • From Kimra on December 04, 2008
    Hmm... enjoying the story and oh so curious.

    So well written and so fun to read. :D
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 04, 2008
    aww sasuke really cares. and i like the part in the end about the sex. lol naruto's gonna have a fit with that one
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  • From antilogicgirl on December 04, 2008
    Excellent chapter. Naruto is very pitiful when he's sick, and it's funny how Sasuke is in denial of being a good person...hehe. Very well done.

    --A
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  • From dolphina23 on December 01, 2008
    Hmmm, i like the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. I caught the bit of frustration from Sasuke whenever they got too close to touch. I also liked the apparent fragility of Naruto in his current state of health and how Sasuke seems to be shying away from worrying about it, or trying to at any rate. It's endearing. I hope there will be more of it when they are at the inn, it's done really well so far. A little of the grammar is confusing but not too many instances of that, so it's okay. I'm intrigued about what Shisui told Sasuke and how the hunt for information and the demon is heating up. It's paced well, too, so i have no trouble keeping up with it. I'll be waiting for more from you on this, really, it's so getting good!
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