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By : sakuyalove

From inumoon3 on November 18, 2009
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Shinigami Twin 04 on October 12, 2009
So.... got back around to this did you. Interesting little fic. I can't wait to see more development with the SasuNaru. Sasuke is going to have a hard time sorting this mess out. But I am glad to see he is an honorable father and husband and would never leave poor Okibi and Ino out to dry. And that extra step reminding Naruto that Ino is indeed in wife. Nice touch. Naruto did take the being a bitch and trying to get back and Sasuke a bit to far. I can understand his frustration and anger that Sasuke seemed to want a baby maker, but can you blame him considering his goals lie in restoration of his family.

It isn't fair for Naruto to have at least considered Sasuke moving on and at least finding someone willing to carry his child for convenience if the whole thing with Tsunade didn't work out. He focused so hard on himself and how he wanted to stay by Sasuke he didn't consider the dilemma that Sasuke was in as the last Uchiha. That is surprising considering how sensitive Naruto usually is, especially about family.

But real props on Sasuke reminding about his wife. I liked that moment. It also served as a really good reminder that revenge does no one any good in the end. Naruto cared so much for Sasuke it broke his heart that he ended up leaving him to restore his clan, but willingly allowed himself to lose him. He could have as Sasuke informed let Sasuke know and refuse hell and high water to easily get back with him rather than creating a separation between them regarding this whole family mess. Besides all that, this wasn't fair to poor Ryuu and Okibi, he's really complicated their lives and intended for Ryuu to go without a father.

But, revenge is indeed a terrible thing. Sasuke knows that best, sad that in this AU Naruto doesn't seem to recall it. I can't remember the details of the whole Itachi thing as far as this story is concerned. But interesting take on a vengeful Naruto, considering him seeing the avenger in Sasuke and how it breeds nothing but hatred and pain to everyone; it is a surprise he took his vengance this far.

Can't wait to see the coming moments. We going to help the family out and leave both of them widows. Make Ino and the other woman out to be perfect martyr mothers who sacrificed themselves for life in the form of children. Perhaps even gain some respect points for Uchiha in Ryuu's book that way. But may be too simple a route to kill Ino in protecting Ryuu....

Well, I'll just have to see won't I? ^___~

Thanks for continuing. I was starting to think another mpreg based story of yours that wouldn't make it. I am very sad to see that Second Chance has died out. I hope that the same will not happen for Best Served Cold. Don't know what it is about the way you write these, but it kind draws me in. Though I must admit I think Second Chance was a better plot and read than this one as far as the characters go and everything happening.

Sincerest Regards,
Shinigami Twin 04
(Quatre Raberba Winner)
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From Gwyllion on September 19, 2009
Another awesome update! Thanks so much! I hope Naruto would be harder on Sasuke....in a lot of fics, he tends to forgive him too easily. But after Naruto's revenge here, he's my total favorite out of all fics. Can't wait to read moer from you!
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From serenagold on September 16, 2009
Naruto does not think rationally at all. He has all of Konoha at his command to save his kid and Ino. Instead, He and Uchiha sneak off and showboat it alone. Dobe.
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From JtheChosen1 on September 15, 2009
Awesome work! Naruto needs to remember though why he hates Sasuke! The Uchiha would have only stayed with him for their child, not love!!!
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From cynaga on September 15, 2009
Wondeerful~! Great sense of suspense. I can't wait for the next installment. Thanks!!!
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From Prism0467 on September 15, 2009
I hadn't read this story before today. I like it. It's very clever. Keep up the good work.
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From inumoon3 on September 07, 2009
Please update!
It's been so long, and I want to know what's going to happen.
I also can't wait for Naru and Sasu to get back together.
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From ANON - Angel on May 25, 2009
Arrgghh! I could just die lol. Wicked premise, it's scary how vindictive Naruto is but Sasuke's actions have been loathesome and he deserves the hatred I just wish Naruto wasn't the one hating him nor infecting his own son with such malice.

Ryuu is one scary kid - they are only 8 years old so far Okibi is the cute one who actually acts like a powerful child whereas Ryuu is acting more like a monster.

I am fretting to get into another one of these stories because the writers often neglect them...hope you don't but glad to just read what there is anyhow :)
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From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2009
oooooooooooooooo a twist in the story!!! keep up the good work!!!
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From ANON - Shinigami Twin 04 on May 21, 2009
Alright... I give you props. I am sucked in now. Darn, and this better not turn out like the Second Chance and not be finished. I think I finally give that you just won't return to that one.

Either way... very interesting indeed. Wow. I am impressed. I usually hate SasuNaru (not NaruSasu) but this one was too well done to pass up. Although I kinda figured it out from the beginning given I read Second Chance... but you almost got me when you threw in the Naruto finding a wife to carry the child.

And WTF with the ANBU guards knowing all the business. I guess they do get kind bored and curious waiting there and all anyway. Not to mention if you don't listen closely can't be sure to impede danger in good enough time.. But poor Sasuke, but he had it coming indeed. Is there a turn around possible form him one must wonder. Damn, Naruto can be one vengeful little thing. Very feminine of him. (We all know women tend to bite back five times harder. Another dude just slug you and get over it. Women let it fester and build and boil so that it leaves a nice acid burn when they hit back. Nope, no healing bruise like men would leave. Women want scars dammit. ^__~)

Anyways... yea... the one thing I don't think I like and will be able to take if this goes anywhere near in depth and long enough... is firstly the Sasuke suffering would be hard to bear. Because Naruto really should have just said something. But I kinda see his point. But... miss communication goes two ways is what Naruto should remember. But worse than all that, poor Okibi. T-T What will become of him as his dad struggles with the dilemma?! I guess I find it so sad because I was all proud Sasuke seemed to make such a great father given his background and issues with his dad. But now what a way to strain a family. I guess, I understand Naruto's bitterness, but that is beyond bitch to ruin that poor child's life when he could do nothing to control that. Naruto being the caring motherly person he is I would like to think would have considered that. (Not to mention he is already aware Sasuke is messed up.) But seriously, I hope Okibi comes out alright.

On that note, I am also disappointed Naruto would seriously raise a child with such VENGEANCE in his head at an early age. That was not good and pretty at all. tsk tsk. So basically, interesting and like so far. But not sure what to make of how this can all end. I see a lot of pain... then again, maybe if things are gone through clearly in the beginning not so much. But it seems unfair that Sasuke finds a way to apologize and do some ass kissing so soon, when Naruto is doing so WAYYYYY out of line things. Because no matter how you slice it, when it comes to Ino and especially Okibi and Ryuu, not fair. Just not kind in any way. Should have taken this all up with Sasuke personally rather than bringing the kids into it so harshly like so.

So... finally read that new chapter. Interesting little plot twistie here. Let's see how this goes over. Am I allowed to guess. This is the brilliant way to get rid of Ino (still not fair to poor Okibi, but maybe he can learn to bond with his brother in the grief of it all... whatever...) because she plays the hero and motherly figure protecting him at some point. And voila opening to bring the family together when Sasuke and Naruto both have to go to the rescue! Still... poor Okibi. I feel for that poor boy. I think he will end up my favorite character. I like how Naruto facilitated the trend of keeping Uchiha boys messed up in the head with this little fiasco. Then again, couldn't be helped, he would have had the kid either way. So the way this worked out was logical. Then again, he could have also just told Sasuke straight out from the beginning. AWWWW!! Then poor Okibi will have to have the "I shouldn't be here, kinda sorta in a weird way not planned or should not have been planned child if you were really happy daddy" thoughts. OH NOES!!! Oh god... this is depressing me already and you haven't technically done any actual (obviously major) angst.

That is what I get for over analyzing the hell out of stuff.
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From ANON - gwyllion on May 18, 2009
WAAAHHH! Thank you so much for this update! I've been dying to find out what happens next. You seriously made my night. I honestly didn't feel sorry for Sasuke at all, but for Ino. I hope Ryuu's attitude would go down a notch or two, but he's just like his Father, Sasuke. Can't wait to know what else you have up your sleeve. Once again, thank you for continuing this story. It's a very enjoyable read. :D
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From ZeroZoey on May 18, 2009
Glad you are back, liked the chapter, hope you update soon. Cannot wait to see what happens next and if Sasuke had anymore children that we do not know about, hope not, but what Ino said who knows. Please update soon.
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From missbri88 on May 18, 2009
Please oh please oh please continue!!! Im new to this story and the plotline looks just amazing!!! I cant wait to see more. So pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaase!!! Pleeeeeeaaaase please please update soon!
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From JtheChosen1 on May 18, 2009
O man this is awesome!!! Naruto is certainly cruel to Sasuke, but the Uchiha certainly deserves it! Keep up the great work!!!
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