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Reviews for Red Dress

By : akatsume1593
  • From Kipling on September 23, 2008
    As red-hott as Tenten's dress. Goddamn! How are you so good at writing lemons? I was so happy to see this updated. I love the way you write, the descriptions and the way you weave the bits of plot and explanation into the story. It's too bad it's complete, I'd love to see how they go on in the apartment, but then I guess I get to look forward to "Only Training"
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  • From roxnroll on September 18, 2008
    I'm loving this. They are so hot together.
    Rox
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  • From Saitochan on August 26, 2008
    Oh, hell Yeah! What a hot scene! More chapters please! It would be nice if this had a storyline, but if it doesn't, that's allright.

    Concrit time! I noticed one or two little mistakes around your story (you wrote a 'flying fuck'... maybe you meant a 'fling fuck'?) Other than that, it was awesome!
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  • From rallybabe89 on August 26, 2008
    I'm thinking this should be a two shot?
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  • From serenagold on August 26, 2008
    You need to ask?


    YES!
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