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Reviews for The Bellboy

By : brook13baby13
  • From ANON - Kirai on March 09, 2009
    I was in shock to see that chapter eight was the last chapter, it makes me sad for the story was so wonderful. Even though it was not yours to begin with you still gave to it after the creator left it to die. I greatly enjoy the story and the emotional outbreaks between the characters. I hope that there will be a sequil by the name of the last chapter. That would be just so wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2009
    Nice, though it has a very sudden ending.
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  • From ANON - hellokitty4Ever! on January 04, 2009
    I liked bellboy alot! I like lots of her stories, but L should be the uke. Its practically written in stone. But back too bellboy... I want to know how it ends. I wasn't meant to wait. Im sure everyone can guess wht happens next, because when it was on chapter five I did. But this story kinda got me trippin... is Naruto going to be the uke or what? That to me wasn't too clear, but the angst is enough to make me wanna read again. NaruxSasu or SasuxNaru...
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  • From hisoka on January 04, 2009
    im kinda wondering why sasuke waited for naruto outside at all?and haku was he scared or did he sense that he should go?wonder how the resr of the band will take this,if naruto stays the night that is(just falling asleep drunk).hope you can update soon
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on January 03, 2009
    cliffie=most evil invention of all time! cant wait to see it
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  • From ImaruMiAmore on January 03, 2009
    I really like this story! Kind of funny and evil... I hope you continue!!
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  • From hisoka on January 02, 2009
    what a fine kettle of fish theyre in,theyre evenly tied and have no way to get eachother.ill just sit back and watch the magic.
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  • From goodluckbadtimes on December 23, 2008
    lol both of them are screwed!
    so you're not updating anymore?? why im confused!?
    but i hope you do ^_^
    and Happy Holidays
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  • From goodluckbadtimes on October 12, 2008
    really good story
    please update sooner

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  • From hisoka on October 01, 2008
    id hate to be apart of that band...unless i could be the plus.how can sasuke not know that hes getting what he deserves its revenge and its sweet but only for so long.whats narutos job anyway,is he like a stripper or something.sasuke gonna have to get use to his new parttime job.hope you can update soon
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  • From zanax on September 30, 2008
    Three more chapters only? :(

    "Payback is a Bastard" - michelerene/lexjamandme

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2008
    Wow, this is a really good story so far, i do hope you continue it. Don't feel you need to copy this author's style or anything, write it however you want and i'm sure it'll be very good, i haven't read anything you've written so i don't really know how you write ^^;

    I want to see naruto dom sasuke and get his revenge :P
    But sasuke's not a willing sub either, so naruto will have his work cut out for him XD
    Or have naruto make sasuke strip at that Boys Boys Boys place :P
    I'm betting sasuke's a virgin too ~_^
    *sigh* there's just never enough sasuke uke stories XD
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  • From ANON - Mikayla on September 04, 2008
    AHHH i want to read more.
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  • From LunayaWolf on September 04, 2008
    Hey this is a really fun story , I hope that you decide to continue it. After reading some of your earlier stuff then this, WOW, i mean really..just..WOW. I would love to know your secret, what helped you improve so much? I see you have a LOT of stuff written so it must be the practice practice practice method or something. What ever you did it really worked, bravo. Your most resent stories are phenomenal.
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  • From hisoka on August 30, 2008
    oh ga, he landed in so much barf thats so sick.vomit smells so bad and to sit in it and let it seep through your clothes...not so plesent.sasukes such a dick i want breakfast but we have no bacon!one kiss for all he knows naruto thinks hes still in some odd way drunk,thats what happens when you drink the expensive shit in hotel friges.hope you can update soon
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