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Reviews for Give me the Words

By : Shiruy
  • From TrinityFromtheEraofBlood on December 17, 2009
    i love this pairing!!! omg like you don't even know and i think you might be one of the few authors who can actually write!!!
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  • From DetoxAngel on December 07, 2008
    Ahhh...good stuff.
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  • From ANON - Meli Christophorous on November 04, 2008
    yea but i wonder who regreted that more, minato or the anbu....my bets are on minato, what with the energy and the property damage and such...yeah. i'd've hated to be that kids nanny. *shudders* so happy to hear that you're updating original sin! ah, i did the dance of happiness. i gotta say, it's about time *pouts, shakes finger at you* and i hope it will be as great and amazingly fantastic as the others. cheers to you and birthday blessings on your friend. ja ne. Meli-chan.
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  • From Blackwidina on November 03, 2008
    *dies laughing* Owl-san's in trooooouuuuble!


    I love it!

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  • From Blackwidina on October 25, 2008
    I take it back; ch. 9 is my favorite now. Naruto is sooooo cute in this one, and I think it's also very true to you fic how *intense* he can be when he gets a notion in his head. And I have to admire the patience of the Owl in the closet. Seriously, six+ hours in a cramped space is bad enough, but I've watched enough horror movies to be wigged out by little kids acting strange-and Naruto's already demon-possessed. And then he opens the door and starts talking about ghosts . . . O_O Be afraid of little children that act omniscient. Trust me, I work in a daycare. I know these things.

    But I digress. Excellent work, and I hope to see more soon, in either this or Original Sin-trust me, I know how awful writer's block can be. It took me over a month to get my last chapter out, and I thought people were going to lynch me. >_
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  • From snnj11220 on October 20, 2008
    This was so freaking cute! Though not about our sexy blond duo, I loved this one just as much if not more than the others, the idea for this one was brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Meli Christophorous on October 20, 2008
    that last chapter was great! ghosts! hah! you tell 'em naru! i love this little collage of daily life with naru, and i think it sets up a great background for minato and naruto's future....but....i gotta be a total butt and ask when the next chapter of original sin is coming out. this is pretty much the only decent mina/naru fic i can find (and it rocks to the umpteenth degree, believe me) and i'm getting fidgetty. pretty please the next chapter soon? but back to my review, i love how the ANBU was locked in the closet all day and didn't even kno that naru knew he was there. that naru is one amazing little kid. you are the best and i love you and all of those other regulation reviewer accolades you deserve (you *do* deserve them). keep it up. love and peace. ja ne. Meli-chan.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Kismet on October 18, 2008
    Yea! An update! That was funny. I enjoyed Naruto's description of the "ghosts" and I can't believe he stayed watching the closet so intently for all those hours.^_^ The last line was ominous sounding.

    Looking forward to your next update,

    Kismet
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  • From ValheruYaoi on October 16, 2008
    LOL... man i could totally see that happening... Poor anbu. being outsmarted y a 4 year old :)
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  • From Nikana on October 16, 2008
    "Is there a ghost inn in the attic?"... Now that line blew me up laughing like mad,and i can picture the poor anbu trying to grasp the meaning behind a 4 years old kid and laughing himself silly,like the one under the bed.This is so good and they chose so funny places to hide them self,though its odd...they cut out the surveillance once naruto was old enough to become a shinobi,right?
    ^^ very,verrry nice as alway darling ^^
    ja ne

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  • From ANON - Sailor Kismet on October 06, 2008
    Nice. I liked these drabbles. Insights on their feelings and frustrations and also seeing Naruto's interaction with Team 7. Can't wait for more. ^^
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  • From Nikana on October 05, 2008
    oh! I know this word doesn't exist but this chapter was scorchinnocent!!!! jajaja^^ scorching hot in its "innocence"
    And just for you to know,you update I leave a review, no matter what story you put up!!
    ja ne
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  • From Blackwidina on October 05, 2008
    I loved loved *loved* Ch. 8! 'Reverie' was just the funniest thing in the world, when set in the timeline, just *knowing* that Minato's inevitably going to be pushed(shoved) down that road! I love your writing altogether-and especially the way you write the characters-and I can't wait to see what you come up with next, either with this or Original Sin. Keep up the fantastic work!

    -Dina
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  • From ANON - Meli Christophorous on October 02, 2008
    MORE! MORE! i demand more! and PLEASE update original sin! soon, please. i understand plot development and background set-up, but please? i love minato as you've written him, and the quieter, somehow more sai-ish naruto is just too huggably cute! please update soon, because this story just makes me smile and sigh wistfully as dozens of could-have-beens dance around the edge of my consciousness. good job, and many more accolades to your work and thought processes. peace and love. Meli-chan.
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  • From TheSimi on September 29, 2008
    So very awesome! Your writing is amazing and I can't wait to read more! Thank you for this chapter!
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