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Reviews for Becoming a Slave

By : zanax
  • From ANON - QueenofQuill on March 21, 2010
    Sorry it's QueenofQuill again. I just read my own review and I said sasuke seme when I meant sasuke uke. Sorry. There are too many sasuke seme stories around and the sasuke uke owns that are around usually turn sasuke into a quivering mess. this onw doesn't it stays true to the characters and I hope I see some more of it soon.
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  • From ANON - QueenofQuill on March 20, 2010
    Ohh please write more of this, I just love sasuke seme stories but not ones where sasuke comes out of character. In this we can clearly see that sasuke is the same person but I still see him as an uke. I mean in the manga he lets himself get manipulated and used and it is a true fact that people who are authoritive in real life are submissive in the bedroom because it's taking a wait off their shoulder and giving them relise.

    Please update soon.

    Best wishes QueenofQuill
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on May 29, 2009
    First of all I want to say that this story is brilliant and so good. Please keep updating I can't wait for more;)

    I have to say that Sasuke didn't deserve so much from Naruto. I mean, Sasuke would never be so cruel and Naruto is and most of all Naruto is embarassing him and taking his pride. Sasuke maybe insulted him but never took Naruto's pride. It is just no fair and I think it is too much from Naruto. What is wrong with him that he has so much against Sasuke?

    Please I want to see what will happen next:) Please update it already:) You are so good writer.
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  • From LadyWolf on September 13, 2008
    MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!!!!! MORE!!!!

    This is getting good! I always said that that all Sasuke needed was a good spankin'!

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  • From TheNeverEnding on September 10, 2008
    Wow I love this story! It's so hot. Sasuke as Naruto's bitch is the best. Yum! *blush* I look forward to the rest of the story. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Hello Mitty on September 07, 2008
    So out of character. I don't like it.
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  • From on September 06, 2008
    I love it! I've read Hestia's D/s naruto about 3 times and you're story is just as good. Keep up the great work, I can't wait for Sasuke being punished on stage. ~SangoStar
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2008
    Damn... I feel sorry for Sasuke....
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  • From Raholea on September 05, 2008
    sadistically cruel.... spankings in front of the whole club, nice one. especially with the fact that Sasuke doesn't want to truly break down and submit. I'm really liking your Naruto here

    Eager to see whats in store for the next chapter. *hugs* and good luck with whatever you have planned.
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  • From ANON - BD on September 05, 2008
    yess!
    Sasuke should moan like the bitch he is when he's getting spanked infront of everyone.
    Love the story.
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  • From ANON - Nova on September 05, 2008
    I really missed Hestia, and I think you're going to become my new addiction. Chocolate cookies to you!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on September 05, 2008
    OMFG!!!!!!! What does Naruto have against Sasuke 'his' exDOM??? He is totally getting him back for something. Damn! This story is so good. With every lash Sasuke got, I whimpered as well.:( Please update soon, MISTRESS.XD
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  • From nm1716 on September 05, 2008
    I love it and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE FEED AGAIN SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2008
    hello, it's hakai here. I thank you very much for offering your help to beta Take Me With You,but I have two betas already for that fic, (I searched for a beta on yaoi gallery before submitting and they offered their help.)

    it makes me a bit worried that you offered to beta it, since it was already betaed, LOL, but I hope it wasn't so bad.
    I would offer you to beta one of my other stories, (I lost my long time beta yesterday), but 1st: I don't know if you'd like it, 2nd, I still don't know if I'll remain on aff or leave, so it would be mean to make you work on stuff I wouldn't post on the site anymore.

    thank you for your review anyway.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on September 05, 2008
    OMFG I LOVE NARUTO IN THIS FIC AS DOM THAT IS SO DAMN HOT AND SASUKE AS SUB/UKE IS IN MY TOP 10 AS THE FUCKING HOSTEST SHIT IN THE WORLD. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE. GREAT JOB. CAN YOU TELL THAT I LOVE YOUR FIC.^_^
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