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By : sameyler
  • From purplehaze101 on December 14, 2012
    This was so freaking cute!!! I loved it! I think I have never squealed so much in my life! it was sexy and well written! Definitely one of my favs!
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  • From ANON - Kim on March 27, 2010
    if you agree or disagree, please inform me by mailing.
    my e-mail is - before.the.down@hotmail.co.uk
    thanks a lo for this fic!!
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  • From ANON - Kim on March 27, 2010
    That was great. i read 4 chapters and i really like it.
    i think it's quite good)))
    also i wanted to ask you, don't you mind if i'll translate your fic to russian language and post it?
    your copyright probably will saved
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  • From ANON - Hanamori Halibel Kuchiki on February 27, 2010
    Woww. So c0ol. . I tthink u have talented.. Ur imaginati0n s0 fantastic. .
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  • From tamingriki on October 14, 2009
    Have only read chapters 1-9. So far the story is very good. However, when Naruto responds to a yes or no, the word used is shook. That word should only be used for no. Yes is nodding. Don't mean to criticize. It's the English Major in me.
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  • From arabuzumaki on October 13, 2009
    I would love to help out ^_^ If you still need help send me an email. i wanna see some itachi kyuubi goodness
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 10, 2009
    Chap. 12

    LOL Ok a really drunk Naruto...lol I hope he PUKES in Itachi's face that would totally serve him right for running off with him and trying to take advantage of a drunk person!!
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 10, 2009
    Oh my gosh!! Gaara is just so HOT!!! LOVE HIM TOO!! He is just so SWEET!!!
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  • From ANON - Timber on October 10, 2009
    Up to chapter 3 and so far I think its really CUTE!! I think its a really fresh idea for a story so have to say ....LOVE IT!! I think everyone has at least once in their life thought what it would be like or what would happen if a real angel fell in love with a person...right???....or is that just me being odd with too much thinking time during my lunch breaks???
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on May 30, 2009
    wow you should soooooo do a sequel !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was amazing
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  • From ANON - sabrina on January 01, 2009
    yay perfect ending
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  • From tawanawelch on December 30, 2008
    That was a funny ending but Hot and Delicious!!! I just love their romance.XD

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  • From ANON - maki on December 20, 2008
    It's cute, I like it. Just a couple errors. No biggy. Like the AN before the story.

    dessert: treat eatened after a meal

    desert: hot place with lotta sand

    ^____^
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  • From asm613 on December 19, 2008
    You had written that Naruto had been watching Sasuke his whole life. But when he gets to earth you have him acting like a retard and he doesn't know human interaction and he doesn't know what alcohol is and he lets people take him away from Sasuke. Then Sasuke after letting Naruto get almost raped, after letting Gaara kiss him, after having tenten get him drunk (all of these things happened when he let Naruto out of his site); why would he let Naruto out of his sight again_only to let Itachi take him_not a very smart Sasuke. I'm assuming you're going to have Naruto throw up all over Itachi--that's the only thing that will make the ending of this chapter and the beginning of the next worthwhile. This story is a really cute idea but the execution is
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  • From ANON - Tansy Moon on December 19, 2008
    love it keep up the good work ne!
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