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By : sameyler
  • From hisoka on September 02, 2008
    its always nice to find someone willling to protect you because they care...i just imagined myself as an obeise women,sitting on people would be so effective.so now do we find out why naruto cant talk?hope you can update soon
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  • From sonykit on August 30, 2008
    hey there! are you doing better already? i'm really sorry about what's up with your boyfriend and bestfriend. you may hurt now, but keep in mind, you'll get over it given time. :) anyway, this chapter really set the pace going with the sasuke-gaara rivalry. i like how sasuke was really worried but was hesitant to show it. i found the situation with gaara interesting, so possessive and sure to give sasuke a big competition. i just hope he doesn't get too violent. hope sasuke gets naruto back in his arms real soon! thanks for the update! :)
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  • From tawanawelch on August 30, 2008
    I'm so excited!!!!!! I love when Sasuke and Gaara are up against eachother. Will Naruto start to like Gaara for a while and have to decide who he really likes? or well I'll just wait to see what happend.XD
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  • From Lilia on August 30, 2008
    Awesome! Is Gaara going to try and rape Naruto? Is Sasuke going to want him? Will Naruto ever speak again? AND WHAT HAPPENED IN HEAVEN?!?!?!?!?!
    Lilia, the uke rapist.
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  • From hisoka on August 30, 2008
    hahaha,condoms full of milk wonder if thats illegal.so whats he gonna do, is he actually gonna call itachi from like a pay phone or something(do they even have payphones anymore?) gaara became possesive fast even before actually conversing(wonder if you could call saying 'thank you' through writing conversing)with the object of his offections(can you even say that?).well hope you can update soon so wanna findout sasuke and gaaras reaction to each other especially gaaras after narutos affection towards sasuke.
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  • From sonykit on August 24, 2008
    hey there! do i sense a love triangle in the making with gaara? hmmm..anyway, this chapter foreshadowed a lot of things, especially with naruto's reason for being and wanting to be with sasuke. can't wait to read more! thanks!
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  • From tawanawelch on August 24, 2008
    Oooooh!!!! Good sequence with the Sand sibs. How could I forget about Gaara? Now we'll be in for some real angsting on Sasuke's part when he finally realizes he wants Naruto. Then we'll see an all out war between the two (or more) SEXY Semes!!!!!!!!
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  • From hisoka on August 24, 2008
    you never wanna have fun with grown ups unless they tell you what they wanna do(i dunno climb to the top of buildings and spit loogies on peoples heads er somethin)kids,or little boys are fun all they wanna do is fight, little girls well...they ask too many questions their too smart to play with.one good thing about little kids is that when the wanna fight they use all their strength.wonder if sasuke will get home before naruto and what his reaction will be if he finds him not there,will gaara even let him go?hope you can update soon
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  • From hisoka on August 22, 2008
    he thinks real hard after that one kiss.why doesnt narutos voice work?(im sure someone else alresdy asked).whats with itachi,do they really share prostoitutes?hope you can update soon
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  • From tawanawelch on August 21, 2008
    So, Sasuke's a Player with lots of one night stands? Bad boy Sasuke. Too bad Itachi.
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  • From sonykit on August 20, 2008
    Hi! i totally laughed out loud in the third chapter! it was so funny and naruto was just so adorable. sasuke was also cute, especially with how he treated naruto sweetly but not obviously so. the kiss was a nice touch. it set the ball rolling for changes in their relationship. The fourth chapter was hot, what with sasuke fantasizing over naruto! now sasuke can no longer live in denial land. his teasing bro was also a nice touch, even if he does live to annoy the hell out of sasuke. it was quite funny how he got caught but was not flustered. really good. thanks for the update! :)
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  • From tawanawelch on August 20, 2008
    Ooooh! I wish there was some fan art of Naruto and his black wings. I wish I could draw. I hope Naruto doesn't get into any trouble on the way home.
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  • From tawanawelch on August 20, 2008
    This is going to be such a fun story. I love Sasuke getting a nosebleed. Will there be others in this fic to possibly come between the two while Sasuke's angsting?
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  • From coldXrainX1891 on August 19, 2008
    i actually like this fic! i honestly didn't think i would like the plot
    but i do! Yay! I really like it so do great on the next chapter(s) ok?
    and i can't wait to find out why Naruto was banished!
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  • From SDRR on August 19, 2008
    I have no problem with short chapters - most of mine end up that way. I'm more of a 'quality than quantity' person.

    My email is amandababy3@yahoo.com. You could email me your chapter and I'll go over it or something like that if you want. Whatever, up to you.
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