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Reviews for Desperation

By : Jelp
  • From ANON - Ninja S on May 07, 2011
    I really enjoyed the story, and I hope that you continue with it soon
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  • From SirGeneralSir on February 10, 2011
    its a good story, i like it, i hope that you finish it up as its keeping me drawn to it
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  • From ANON - Bats on March 14, 2010
    I love this fic VERY much! I was reading some of your other fics and this one just caught my interest so i checked it out. The way you captured the characters personalities is frickin amazing! Your Hinata is DEAD on (i think so anyway) :D I never read a Naruto/Hinata before this and i just want to read more! I hope you continue to update this story, it's just too good not to! lol Have a Happy Birthday btw :)
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  • From ANON - chococake on December 04, 2009
    Please say you'll update this story! It's been so long.

    This is one of the few good Naruto/Hinata stories out there. And with the garbage going on in the manga, I really could use some Naru/Hina loving.
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  • From ANON - Snake-eat-dog on August 07, 2009
    Congrats and all that, but I could KILL for an update to THIS fic by now, I mean it, you just give me a name and a cleaver, I'll round up a whole bunch of them!

    A short way of putting all that, this fic is one of the best of the best of the best, and me need more :) please?

    Chiao
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  • From nahleili on June 01, 2009
    This fic is EXCELLENT. Realistic with a twist, good length, good idea. Well written and imaginative. Please update soon! Reading this was a breath of fresh air.
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  • From ANON - The big naru fan on May 30, 2009
    well i absolutely love this story i think it is amazing and i can not wait for the next update plz update soon i need to find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - Killer Intent on March 14, 2009
    This story is great.
    It really grabs and almost forces you to read it. It's incredible how easy it is to fall in love with it.
    All of your insight on Hinata and her character is probably what makes the story. Naruto's not so bad himself.

    I don't really see much that you can improve on when it comes to storytelling. You're better than most, I say.

    I saw the picture made for one of your other stories. Was it a while ago? I bet you were ecstatic; it's incredibly well done.

    Congratulations on your upcoming marriage. Best of wishes and good luck.
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  • From ANON - seacatsd on March 03, 2009
    Nice chapter! This is one of my favorite stories on this site, it interesting that it's a joint project! (sort of) :)

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From girlgamer1984 on March 02, 2009

    I have been reading this story from the start, and I must say: out of the crap, and literally barf-inducing material, probably drenching with the cesspool of disgusting bed room practices, your story shines like a jewel.

    It is romantic, the sex scenes are perfectly done, and there are no blow jobs or disgusting anal-sexes (no offense if you DO write anal sex, because I am just being honest). You know what; I am relieved this story does not follow the same route as 2078686867 other stories in the AFF rotten fruit basket. Keep up the good work.

    I shall be reviewing every chapter from this point forth, as you clearly deserve all the credit thrown your way. I will probably find this story on FF.

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  • From RichardH on March 02, 2009
    ...getting better and better all the time. My fiancee and I are getting our wedding plans together now too, so let me know how you make out with yours
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  • From serenagold on March 02, 2009
    Aww.. Naruto and Hinata are so cute together. I'm glad he stood up to her father and I enjoyed your backstory for his upbringing. ^^

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From statnin on March 02, 2009
    Dam I loooooove this fic!

    keep it up!

    Leaf > Out
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  • From KdaAnimefan on March 01, 2009
    its a good chapter, well written, good flow, i look forward to the next one ^^
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  • From ANON - Chris on January 19, 2009
    Very good chapter. The stories flowed really well so far. keep up the great work. Looking forward to the interaction between Naruto and Hiashi.
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