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Reviews for Desperation

By : Jelp
  • From Saraneko on August 20, 2008
    Can't wait for the next chapter >< Hina/Naru is my second fav pairing after Tema/Shika ^^ And it's so nice to see Hinata actually taking control of a situation!
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  • From harmonyecho on August 20, 2008
    interesting is this going to be a long series? I like the first chapter are you planning on continuing?
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 19, 2008
    Very interesting start and I'm interested were this going. Hopefully this will be not to long and have some unique events plus a happy ending? So lets and have fun in it.
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  • From ANON - videogameguy10 on August 19, 2008
    This looks like a good story in the making. Please keep it up.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on August 19, 2008
    Awesome story can't wait for the next chapter update soon.
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  • From Saitochan on August 18, 2008

    Wow, poor Hinata. I always kind of expected this outcome whenever I read fics about Naruto getting serious with other kunoichi, but Ino? That's sort of far-fetched, isn't it? I hope you explain that a little more in the next chapters.

    I was slightly dissapointed by how short this chapter was, but the writing is pretty good and the story seems to flow nicely. I'll be waiting to read (and review) as soon as you update. Don't take too long!
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  • From ANON - vic on August 18, 2008
    this looks really funnny. i cannot wait to see what happends

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  • From ANON - Edo EroSennin on August 18, 2008
    looks good, hopefully the next chapters will be a bit longer, but the story is ok, quite amusing, can't wait for more =D
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