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Reviews for Desperation

By : Jelp
  • From Verakum on September 03, 2008
    i love your story.... update soon please specially of you make naruto realize hina is great girl for him instead of that ino-pig (Inner-Verakum shakes fist) lolXD

    tell your fiance loool at his comment and gratz for you 2 ;)
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  • From rxtechgirl on August 31, 2008
    Really, really good story! Please update soon. *grins*
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  • From serhoth on August 31, 2008
    Interesting so far. Look forward to reading more.
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  • From serenagold on August 31, 2008
    Is Naruto really in love with Hinata?? That would be sweet! Although I don't know what Ino's position is in all this. Even if she liked him, I can't see her the type to up and marry right away. (Unless she's pregnant? :x THough, somehow I think that would have been mentioned...)

    Sasuke's speech was great.

    Loved the chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - skeeve on August 31, 2008
    This is a truley funny yet, somber story. It brings back some not so cherished memories of a lost chance of my own. I will wait impatently for you next chapter.
    Skeeve
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 31, 2008
    First up I kinda agree with your fiancee, second I don't like hinata sad or hurting and third Naruto isn't that starved for love that he would marry the first girl he meets. BUT since this is your story I'll keep faith that you have a general plan that will help everyone's favorite kyuubi brat and the hyuuga princess so I will admit your third chapter was REALLY good and keep hopeing for the best.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 31, 2008
    Keep up the great work I can't wait till we find out what mission Naruto and Ino have that they have to be "married" for. ANd second Hinata kinda left a lot of evidence that wasn't no dream so even Naruto couldn't be that oblivious... (then again....)
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on August 29, 2008
    I Loved It.I Love It.I LOVED IT.I Can't Wait For How The Story Proceed.Oh,My God.That Was Just So Hot.
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  • From ANON - NarutosBrat on August 28, 2008
    This is getting really good. I wonder what happens if Naruto figures it out, or if Ino finds out.
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  • From Verakum on August 28, 2008
    that was sooooo hot.... i loved it a lot please more chappies... i wanna read more... im not so fan of naru hina but for this one i really love it... and it seems that indeed Shy girls are the most wilds hehehehe
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  • From anubite on August 26, 2008
    Increible!

    Excellent work, dood. Seriously, the set up is good (believable), the sex awesome, and I so hope you'll write more.
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  • From ANON - DeAndrea on August 26, 2008
    omg please update soon
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  • From Saraneko on August 25, 2008
    Can't wait to find out what happens now that Hinata had her way ^^
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  • From serenagold on August 24, 2008
    Haha... Naruto might be a little dense... although waking up the following morning naked with scratch marks may be a hell of a clue!

    Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From ANON - mike on August 23, 2008
    man that was really good. i cant even imagine how she's gonna get in pants but ur gonna tell us, right?
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