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Reviews for Desperation

By : Jelp
  • From KdaAnimefan on October 14, 2008
    nice chapter, incredibility interesting ending of latest one, looks like the whole sceme will be revealed to naruto in the next chapter ^^
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  • From Saraneko on October 13, 2008
    aaaahhhh! so good. So, this means that Naruto knows, right? hehe, can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on October 13, 2008
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on October 13, 2008
    AAARRRGGGHHH!!! You... You... A cliffhanger??? PLEASE UPDATE SOON YOU ALMOST DROVE ME CRAZY WITH THIS LAST CHAPTER IT WAS ROMANTIC, TENSE, AND EXCITING ALL AT ONCE!!!! Okay breath in (inhales), breath out, (exhales) and relax... Okay I'm okay now. I can't wait to see what happens next. When Hiashi hears about this... When Tsunade hears about this.... When Ino, Sakura, or Kiba hear about this..... Oh I can't wait I can't Wait so please don't keep us in stitches...
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  • From ANON - just me on October 12, 2008
    I love your story, and I can't wait to see what happens next, but your cliffhangers are brutal, you can't just put that in the story and then end it. Cruel.

    Update soon, please!!!
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  • From ANON - videogameguy10 on October 12, 2008
    Another great chapter. The ending to this chapter just left me wanting moar. Please keep it up.
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  • From rxtechgirl on October 12, 2008
    I just finally finished 6 and 7. All I can say is wow. You defintely know how to keep a girl interested. lol Keep up the good writing.
    ~Ani
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  • From Perpetual159 on October 12, 2008
    Wow, this is some serious craziness going on now. Yay, I'm finally writing a review from the computer and not my pocket PC! I can use proper punctuation!

    Naruto is so damn thick, I swear. How can someone possibly be that clueless? Oh, I pray that he doesn't get mad at Hinata after all of that! She did tried telling him, but he was being the moron he CAN be! Your writing is awesome as always, but somehow I get the feeling you cut that chapter short on purpose! Now you're just being evil, I swear!
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  • From KdaAnimefan on October 07, 2008
    very nice, pretty good twist there at the end, seems it will end badly in the next chapter, i look forward to it ^^
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  • From Jin on October 07, 2008
    Poor, clueness Naruto. He always has a way of making stories like these more interesting.

    Nice work. Update soon.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on October 06, 2008
    Okay let me get this straight, Hinata takes Naruto's virginity and her own two weeks ago and since then he has dreams of being with Hinata? Yup the manga's right he is a idiot genius of hard work!!! Okay please tell me that in the morning Naruto's going to wake up with Hinata in bed with him? Heck the reaction alone would be worht it you know? Still I love this story so far and I'm still hoping for Hinata and Naruto you know? Keep up the great work.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on October 06, 2008
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on October 06, 2008
    i figured this might be the best way to get a hold of you. i think someone else plagiarized "nameless desires". it is just the plot and not word for word, but that's bad enough because they didn't rewrite it very well. it is a fic called "all the while" on tokiohotelfiction.com if you would like to check it out for yourself. i'm waiting to see if i get a response from the author before i report it to the mods, but you are welcome to do as you wish seeing as it's your story and all. sorry that people are jerks. :(
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  • From Saraneko on October 05, 2008
    EEEE! I love it so much ^^ I can't wait for the next chap...perhaps another Naruto/Hinata lemon?
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  • From thas on October 05, 2008
    i get that naruto is marrying ino. i get that hinata molested naruto but why, is it ever going to be explained, you seem to be getting side tracked into the hinata/naruto love thing. is ino using her mind techniques on naruto and if she is why. did she get knocked up from another partn er and that person decided not to take responsiblity or what.
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