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Reviews for Desperation

By : Jelp
  • From inumoon3 on October 27, 2008
    Another wonderful chapter.
    Poor Hina-chan!
    And I'm happy that Naruto didn't take it as bad as I thought he would...
    I think the next chapter he should probably talk to Sasuke about it.
    Well wonderful chapter, I hope that you send me another email letting me know when you update!!! :)
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  • From KdaAnimefan on October 27, 2008
    interesting chapter, not how i pictured her telling him, i had thought that the confession of sex would come before the pregnancy confession, and from the end of the chapter, it seems like naruto has gained feelings for hinata, and may challenge hiashi to marry her, but i dont know, i look forward to the next installment ^^
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  • From inumoon3 on October 24, 2008
    Love it.
    Would like to be updated when your story is updated.
    The email is inumoon3@yahoo.com
    Hope to read more soon!!
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  • From ShadowInu on October 21, 2008
    sweet sweet story. its really cute.. xD
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  • From Saraneko on October 20, 2008
    haha...Yay! Will Hinata eventually tell Naruto, or is she going to hide it? hmm. Can't wait to find out ^^
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  • From ANON - Static Ninja on October 20, 2008
    Yo, at first when reading this I thought that it was goin to be a few quick fantasy chapters.
    but i've gotta give it to ya, its turning into quite a good story. nice job
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  • From RichardH on October 20, 2008
    was it just me, or was that last chapter..... highly intellegent. *bows to Jelp* you are a god/goddess amongst us fan fic writers, please make the next chapter just as epic
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on October 20, 2008
    Awesome chapter.
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  • From Perpetual159 on October 20, 2008
    poor, poor Hinata-chan. what is she going to do!
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  • From KdaAnimefan on October 20, 2008
    very enjoyable chapter, i look forward to the next one, the beginning seemed abrupt and hurried but still enjoyable
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  • From ANON - just me on October 20, 2008
    Great! Keep up the good work, and update soon!
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  • From ANON - blacknoise on October 18, 2008
    The plot thickens!!

    I love this fic.
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  • From ANON - BlueRyuu on October 17, 2008
    oooooo this is such a cliffy!!! XD heheheeheh!!!!! i love it!
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  • From ANON - Cassandra on October 16, 2008
    What a wonderful story! I have never come across such a plot with these two characters before. Awesome!
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  • From serenagold on October 14, 2008
    Ahhh!!! Oh shit!!! (Cue excitemenet!!! +^^+ hehehehehehee)

    oh man oh man oh man.. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! EEEeeeee!!!! ehehheheheheheheheh




    Keep up the excellent work!
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