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Reviews for Desperation

By : Jelp
  • From RichardH on November 11, 2008
    First time I've been on AFF in a few days, and I see an awesome chapter added to this, 4.75/5 (Hinata's body should have responded by hitting her father, I'm just saying)
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  • From ANON - BlueRyuu on November 10, 2008
    i also did not expect him to react like that! kudos to you! you completely tricked me :) that was great!

    :o youre killing me with the 'what was wrong with their engagement in the first place?' bit xD
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  • From Saraneko on November 10, 2008
    poor Hinata :( Loved the chapter, and so happy to see it updated ^^
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on November 10, 2008
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From hsosborne on November 10, 2008
    there just may be a Hiashi v Naruto moment after all, with Hinata on the side
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  • From thas on November 10, 2008
    good story. i still want to know what ino did to naruto?
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  • From KdaAnimefan on November 10, 2008
    hmm, i had waited the time for the latest chapter to come out, it was enjoyable, but predictable nearing the end (since i was running out of chapter lol) i questioned whether or not the wait was worth it, now, im not going to think about that question, great chapter ^^
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  • From MistressDragonFlame on November 09, 2008
    My, this is an interesting story. It's funny, yet... strange. I had the feeling throughout the fic that it was all a gag for Naruto to finally make Hinata do something and/or for Shikamaru to do the same for Ino. Or something.

    Blech. Pregnancy.
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  • From hsosborne on November 06, 2008
    Love all your fics and I can't wait til you add more to them
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  • From avatoa on November 05, 2008
    What the heck is going on with Naruto? If you ask me, Naruto and Ino probably invented the whole engagement as a test for Hinata but had the unexpected side effect of Ino falling for him.
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  • From serenagold on October 29, 2008
    Ack! Great chapter!! The fear and desperation and betrayal and bitterness at the end were artistically handled! I loved Hinata's panicked nervousness and Naruto's cracked mask. Loved it!

    Keep up the great work. Can't wait till Sunday. :P
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  • From ANON - InARealPickle on October 29, 2008
    This is exceptionally good.
    I loved the mental image of a shocked Naruto bent over with his hands in his hair.

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  • From RichardH on October 27, 2008
    albeit his reaction isn't so surprising, I personally don't think Naruto would have it in him to be mad at her. true it was technically rape the first time, I'm sure about 8 other people are going to break it down to him about how she has felt *sorry if I'm seeming to give you unwelcome ideas* if you need any ideas on how Hiashi should react, I have a few really good references for you, one is "Nine Tails, Two Hearts" by Ani Rayne, and the other would be my story "The Power of Youth... and Love." other then that, fantastic job on this chapter, I hope the next one comes soon.
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  • From Saraneko on October 27, 2008
    ah, soooo goooooooddd! It was nice to see Naruto have mixed feelings about everything, makes the story that much better ^^ Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. hehe
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on October 27, 2008
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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