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Reviews for Icha Icha Lumberjacks

By : ThePervertClub
  • From ANON - Layzee@live.se on February 27, 2010
    Ive never read, seen, or even thought about HidaSasu as a pairing, so this was a first.
    A very, very good first aswell ;P

    I made a mental note at the beginning to tell you that the sentences were way to long, some going up to 3 or 4 rows without a single , but somehow
    that changed during the middle of the story and the grammar was very neat.
    Funny thing was that I actually thought somewhere along the way 'damn this author uses a lot of different words for penis' so Reading the AN later on was quite funny :)
    All and all the story was very nice, and iwas suprised by the hotness of this pairing, both characters fierce and funny.
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  • From ANON - AerieTigre on August 19, 2008
    I knew as I was reading that there had to be come sort of challenge associated with all your creative penis-euphamisms. Made me double-take a few times, but explainable. But - lumberjacks? XD Kay, then. Still, you wrote them well, considering the constraints(I'm guessing?).
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  • From bagelsan on August 18, 2008
    I liked the story (the pairing scared the hell out of me, but you made it work!) Sasuke's such a slut...

    But please, PLEASE do not use words like "joystick" and "mantenna" again. That was horrifying. :p Maybe you could have an alternate version with slightly less bizarre word choice, just for readability?
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