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Reviews for Birthdays, Hot Springs, and a Pale Moon

By : mikepd87
  • From hsosborne on August 13, 2009
    *loves*
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  • From hsosborne on July 02, 2009
    *luvs chapter*
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  • From ANON - Jay on June 08, 2009
    OMFG This story is awesome you really need to update and soon.
    your reader
    ~jay
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  • From hsosborne on May 28, 2009
    nice chapter, but I wanted to point out that the clerk in the suit shop is apparently wearing two different sets of clothes in one paragraph. ^_^
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  • From hsosborne on April 10, 2009
    nice chapter, thanks again for the heads up
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  • From hsosborne on March 10, 2009
    great chap, love the male bonding at the end..name calling and projectiles ^_^
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  • From hsosborne on February 05, 2009
    OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com.
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  • From asm613 on November 21, 2008
    ((( his intention was to blackmail Zabuza if he didn’t do as he was instructed. Zabuza sighed and told him he would be in Konoha by nightfall. With that settled Danzo hung up and smiled thinking that no one would interfere with him now.)))___If Zabuza was smart, instead of killing Minato he should have killed Danzo. Because if Danzo would blackmail him once; there's nothing to keep him from blackmailing him again. That's sad for Naruto.

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  • From TheSimi on November 19, 2008
    I loved Gaara in this chapter...so adorable! And Sasuke can be quite the sneak even calling in favors from Sasori to get Naruto on the trip.

    Thank you so much for thsi chapter and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From TheSimi on October 16, 2008
    Thank you for another great chapter and I can't wait to read more! I like a scheming Kakashi...He'll do anything to hold Iruka in his arms :)
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  • From LindyStar on September 16, 2008
    A Girl Worth Fighting For......*dies of the LOL*
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  • From TheSimi on September 16, 2008
    I like this story! Thank you and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From on August 09, 2008
    The writing could be better, a beta reader could fix that.

    But aside from that, I like the plot so far. Naruto's dirty mind amuses me. And so does his ringtone. Looking forward to more.
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  • From serenagold on August 08, 2008
    Hmm... .I wonder why Naruto doesn't think his birthday's that important. Although I'm surprised Sasuke even asked that question. You can't follow up 'what's your ideal vacation spot' with 'what do you want for your birthday?' People can kinda draw conclusions and any surprise you had is lost.

    Anyway, keep up the good work. Seeing as how they've already celebrated Thanksgiving and Xmas, Sasuke's a few months late on this birthday celebration. Hopefully its will be more than made up for when he confronts Naruto with his better-late-than-never gift. ;) hehe
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