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Reviews for Role Reversal

By : LunakaWren
  • From ANON - 2much4dis on June 21, 2009
    omg! Sequel? Sequel!!! Please do that, i loved this like all hell. It was great couldn't be better!!! Please do another!!!
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  • From therar on April 03, 2009
    I meant to review this back when you released the first chapter but i never got around to it. Here i am though and i can honestly say that was a well-worth-read ^_^ I really enjoyed the plot you had going for this. A porn business collaberation, pure gold. And might i say, nice work with the dirty talk. A LOT of fics do that, really poorly. It either sounds cheesy, forced or unbelievable.

    Can I make a writing suggestion though? I really think you should start including more setting techniques. Things that seem really uneccessay but you'd be surprised how well they. Stuff like, scents, objects, colours of the walls, things that you can use to symbolise other circumstances and even foreshadow other events. But, all in all, it's a really really good fic.

    A sequel might be the ideal thing but, at the same time, expermenting with new ideas or trying stuff that might not even work can spark up the imagination. ^_^ Thanks for writing and keep at it.
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  • From Twiggies on February 05, 2009
    Haa, really hot! 8DD
    I like the idea of the Hyugas and Uchihas doing porn movies. XD

    And I don't normally even read GaaLeeGaa, but this one was hot as hell!
    Seriously. Yummy yummy for my brain. :D

    Though..... a gay Neji would've been nice, but he IS a Hyuga after all. XD
    Also Hinata and Naruto are together? Heh, that's nice, at least Hinata also knows that he isn't being unfaithful to her with other WOMEN.
    And well, not with the men either, not really. But good. :D

    SEQUEEEELL !!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2009
    I like this. Sure, I'd like it be longer, but it doesn't feel forced or rushed despite the fact that it will only be three chapters. You might consider separating your paragraphs to make it easier for us to read it, though. Looking forward to the third chapter. -DL
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  • From Leeana69 on January 29, 2009
    Oh NOES!! Sad pasts. T-T
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  • From Leeana69 on January 29, 2009
    .....:FACEPALM:

    BAH HA HA HA HA.

    I'm loving this. And to the multiple choice quiz...I pick D) All of the above. :3
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  • From Squeebunnie on January 08, 2009
    I want more! Please!
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  • From ANON - yeahh on December 16, 2008
    i really think this story is funny and interesting. update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Naru-no-baka on December 08, 2008
    oh man this is gonna be fucking hilrious!
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  • From nekluvshp on October 01, 2008
    WOW!!!! That was....... awesome!!!! GaaLee, or in this case, LeeGaa, is one of my favorite pairings!!! I can't wait to see how things turn out!!!
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  • From edhelwing on September 30, 2008
    O_O

    ...

    O-O

    ...

    -o-

    *intake of breath*

    ^0^

    AHHHH!!! I really like where this is going!!! When will you be updating again?

    Gaara and Lee are one of my favorite Naruto pairings, right after KakashiXIruka and Shikamaru with ANYBODY!!!

    Keep up the good work!!!


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  • From on September 07, 2008
    You are one sick puppy *thumbs up* keep the chapters-... oh gosh! *burries head in pillow* you know what I mean!
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  • From In2lalaland on August 25, 2008
    *snicker* I soooo want to see where you are taking this :)
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  • From Raholea on August 16, 2008
    *chuckles* nice build up, i'd love to see what ends up happening. i'll have to try and keep an eye on this (even though i'm not the biggest gaara/lee fan, i had to check it out.) thanks!!
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  • From ANON - moo on August 09, 2008
    ohhh! i wanna read more of this!

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