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Reviews for 8 Ways to Hell and Back

By : Aleya
  • From MrKennedy on September 20, 2008
    Sorry man, but the fact that she was with Kiba just ruined it for me.
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  • From serenagold on September 19, 2008
    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




    Next chapter! Quickly!!!!
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  • From ANON - Perpetual159 on September 19, 2008
    Short, but Still pretty sweet. I wonder why Hinata is avoiding him when yi comes to the mushy stuff, though? you'd think she'd be celebrating that kind of stuff.
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  • From roxnroll on September 19, 2008
    They are such a hot couple. I can't wait to read the next one.
    Rox
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  • From jaxlax21 on September 04, 2008
    It's really good, but I really hatethe involvment of Kiba, it just makes me sick to think that he has even laid a hand on our sweet Hinata-chan.
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  • From shadowkeepre on September 01, 2008
    Hiya!

    I totally thought that this would end up a one-shot. Imagine my surprise when I found out there was an update. I believe my thought was "Oh, she meant EIGHT ways..."

    Keep it up. I'm really liking this one, especially how you expressed awkwardness in this particular chapter.

    Happy writings ^_^
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  • From rallybabe89 on August 26, 2008
    you know that in the first chapter you mention that naruto removed hinata's tank top then you go back and mention that it was bunched up above her breasts? maybe you should fix that? other than that it was good.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 26, 2008
    Drools.... SIX MORE! Slurp can't wait. I can't wait when we find out if anybody saw anything... (I hope) gotta love girl gossip.
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  • From ANON - blue on August 26, 2008
    You got a good story going here. I kind of like that Hinata hasn't come right out and told Naruto her feelings, and that he's unsure what her feelings are for him. The only "complaint" I got is you wrote that Hinata had slept with Kiba. She still wanted and loved Naruto, but slept with the "dog"? It doesn't make sense, nor is it that believable, because her character isn't like that. You could have written they were really close friends, and people had thought something happened between them but nothing did. Naruto could have been one of those people and still be questioning their relationship like you do have now in your story. Whatever. I just wanted to comment on that. Other than that, it is still a decent story.
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  • From serenagold on August 26, 2008
    Awwww Hinata.. YOu have to officially claim him!!!! Do it!!! Otherwise insecurity is going to eat that boy up from the inside out. >:P

    Hehe.. keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From ANON - Just a reader on August 25, 2008
    It looked like your story got chopped off at the end, or is that the actual end?

    Anyway, good story... I'll be looking forward to the next six ways, and the way to where they finally fall in love... well, at least Naruto!
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  • From roxnroll on August 25, 2008
    That was hot! I love it.
    Rox
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on August 14, 2008
    That Was...Sexy.I S Hope There's More.Your Writing Is Skillful.
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  • From VixenKiss89 on August 09, 2008
    “Uhh… Kakashi in a Thong getting back rubbed by Guy.”

    *on the floor laughing hysterically* There's an image for ya! I really like the story and NaruHina is one of my favorite pairings. Keep up the good work, nee?
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 06, 2008
    Okay that's one! Can't wait for the next seven and hopefully soon!!!
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