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Reviews for Night In South Beach

By : Kimya
  • From DewiSri on March 09, 2009
    *Chesire cat grin* Niiiice...
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  • From Kerrisa on February 21, 2009
    I can't believe I missed an update! I came on yesterday, browsed the titles available and noticed your fic near the top. I squealed in delight, and jumped right into chp 3. I was reading~ and liking what I was reading~ and then I thought I might have missed something.. I had been about a fourth of the way through the chapter when I decided to back track a chapter. Lo and hehold none of it rang a bell! SO! I read chapter two, and then I read chapter three, in one sitting. Err.. laying... I was kinda stretched out on the couch. I didn't realize how long I'd been reading til I looked up and I noticed the sun was in an entirely different position from when I started reading. But my, oh my, let me get back to my review..

    I wondered, would it be saying too much to tell you what your words did to me physically... lol I guess that'd be pretty darn perverted, but, I'm guess it's a tad too late for us to worry about being perverted when we have a very active obsession with yaoi fanfics. Mmmm.. Gyah! Must focus.

    I'm pissed off that I have yet to go to a club like the one run by the Uchihas'. You must tell me where you go clubbing and get your inspiration! That would be such fun! I spend too much time at home on my computer reading! I wanna experience some of the greatness I read! Like 2 dark haired beauties sandwiching a hot blond, on the dance floor, and grinding against him until he completely unravels. That was hot in writing, I bet it would be even hotter in person. Sex on the dance floor! Woooo!!

    And sex in the bedroom, and the bathroom, between two guys, and three, soon to be four~! Ack!! I'm excited!! I never thought fisting could be written in such an appealing manner, but you proved me wrong. Now I've seen fisting (porn) and it wasn't at all appealing, which is why 95% of all porn sucks. Now, erotic fanfiction is a whole new ballpark. There is actually emotion, and a desire to please the other person that just makes the entire scene (scenes) more than just sexually arousing. It's addicting.

    I keep talking (writing) and talking (writing) and I hope it isn't bothersome =( I just want to write more than "That was so hot!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!" You're writing style is amazing and its always a pleasure to read. I think this fic is full to the brim with sexyness and everything that is wonderful and I adore you for it and I'd bake you cookies and other yummy treats every day! I look forward to all your future posts! XOXOX Kei-Chan
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  • From Blackwidina on February 15, 2009
    You . . . are . . . *fans self* Wow. That was deliciously, ridiculously hot. And I'm thrilled to have one chapter that has Ita/Sasu, Naru/Sasu/Naru AND Kaka/Ita. It's like Christmas has come early!

    I also applaud your writing of Itachi and Kakashi. You were worried about them bein OOC, but I really don't think they were. Kakashi and Itachi both hit my radar as natural doms, but as the saying goes, SOMEone's got to be on the bottom, and I think Kakashi does a really, really good job . . . *has to stifle another nosebleed as she remembers.*

    In short, you, your characters, and your story are awesome, and I hope to see more of it soon!
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  • From Prism0467 on February 08, 2009
    OMFG that was hot! This story ROCKS!
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  • From Leeana69 on February 07, 2009
    :snickerfit:

    It's so amazing and pervy that I want to jump into the scene with a video camera. Of course the Uchiha bro's would probably kill me, dismember me, then take my camera for their own use. Those selfish bastards. :indignant pout:


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  • From raaka on February 04, 2009
    I absolutely loved it! I really can't wait for the next chapter. It's so damn hotttt!!!!!! I love your lemons
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  • From Ikippiki on November 30, 2008
    Oh my... I think I need a new pack of tissue, I just finished my new one... that was incredibly hot!
    Pleeeease tell me you're going to write that threesome or double penetration, I'm all hot and bothered just thinking about it. And Kakashi is sooo hot, I'm sure he must be able to top untamed Itachi lol.
    Everybody has to give control at some point, right? AAAHhhh either way Itachi is so sexy!
    I can't wait to read more from you!!
    Well done!!
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  • From crazyforkakashi on November 21, 2008
    OMG.Please tell me that there will be a foursome. All of them at the same time. My wet dream come true. Let me know if you are going to do it.
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  • From LadyPiro on October 12, 2008
    YOSH!

    I loved 'Broke' and I'm soooo glad you wrote a sequel. Yay for Kakashi and yay for updates. You rule!
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  • From Prism0467 on September 14, 2008
    OMFG hooray for updates!!!!!

    You are unbelievable. WTFH did you learn how to write threesomes? And with ItaNaruSasu, no less! I'm pretty sure I came a couple of times before I finished reading your second chapter. How do you do that?!

    I await chapter three with profound enthusiasm.
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  • From Anestshia on August 26, 2008
    *wows* did i miss this when it went up on Y! or something? This is...hot...i mean...wow. Very good job, i'm starting to like your uchihacest just as much as kzg's.
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  • From Kerrisa on August 09, 2008
    *high pitched squeal of utter delightment* I love you~~!! I hadn't been expecting an update so fast! You wonderful author you! *cuddles* Sweetness!! I am so going to hit you up of ff.net you have nooooo idea how excited i am about that xD

    Shweee~! *Spins in circles* I'm glad my last review made you happy enough to giggle! Your fics are brilliant, you deserve props! Ooo, speaking of props, that high end resturant/night club sounded unbelievably awesome. I wish i could go =( Then again, being a higher end joint i probably wouldn't be able to afford it X_X Darn it being the stereotypical broke college student and starving artist!! Dx

    Lol but anywho, i'm looking forward to Part 2~! *cuddles sequels* Wouldn't it be wonderful if a wicked little plot bunny got it's mits on you and refused to let you Not continue this story? I am not above throwing you to a pack of wicked little plot bunnies if it means i get to read more awesome yaoi from you. ^_^ Yes i can be that selfish. Lol XOXOX~! Love Always, Kei-Chan~!
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  • From ElfenDream on August 05, 2008
    HOLY FUCKING HELL! This was sooooo hot! mhm.. I love your smut baby! I didn`t think you`d be able to top the last one.. but.. meh. you almost did it.. hehe. almost.this....close. but then again, try to beat a itasasunaru threesome. *winks* still some of the best smut I`ve read. now!! gimme mooooooore! (oh gods.. I wish I were Sasuke..) *wishes upon a star*
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