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Reviews for What is and What Should Never Be

By : QueSeraSera
  • From Tamyka on September 02, 2008
    Ahh I want more!!! That was great, the whole story is interesting and I was dying to know Neji's secret. I'm glad we do now. The whole thing not just his feelings. Anyways I hope you update soon so I can read more. I really enjoyed this!
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  • From serenagold on September 02, 2008
    hehehehe =^^= Yeah, its hard to foster a relationship with two emotionally stunted individuals. What Neji needs to do is jump Naruto back. (Although I think I prefer Naruto as the dominate partner. Neji needs to be taken. heh. Not that I'm opposed to them switching up from time to time. *blush*) (*hint hint) lol


    Great work with the chapter. Good luck with school and update when you can. ^^
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  • From ANON - Spinner on August 26, 2008
    haha Chapter 2 Only a ninja wou leave a thearpy session viva tree!
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  • From ANON - ...... on August 21, 2008
    I can't wait for the name and history of the new dude--does Neji truly have competition for Naruto?
    And I like Naruto's love of pain--I can totally see him being a masochist! I truly like that you are writing something like this and I can't wait till more!
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  • From serenagold on August 11, 2008
    Hmm.. could it be Sai? >:) hehehe

    I feel bad for Naruto. He totally freaked out when he thought he was frightening Neji. Neji should have gone after him. He obviously has no idea what sort of inner turmoil he caused the blonde and needs to correct it or else Naruto will never jump him again!!!! O_O

    Keep up the great work. ^^
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  • From serenagold on August 07, 2008
    Ha! The more he tries to ignore Naruto, the more Naruto's gonna be all up in his business. Silly Neji. He just has no idea. Naruto will not stand to be ignored. =^^= hehehe
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From Raholea on August 07, 2008
    neji, likes naru but doesn't want to admit it...
    and naruto just needs some hard core lovin...
    hmm...
    *chuckles evilly*

    can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - AerieTigre on August 06, 2008
    I'm impressed. I like this.
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  • From serenagold on August 05, 2008
    Yay!! Enter: Neji!!


    Also, I agree with you. The smut is great.. but ONLY if there is a lot of build up. I don't care so much about random sex.. its the "why" that makes it interesting. hehehe Keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From Onikage on August 05, 2008
    ^.^ It's ok!! I just wanted to re-read it, and.. POOF.. It was gone.. O.O!!

    Thanks for the updated chapter, and for the work you put into the story.. ^.^
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  • From jordash00 on August 05, 2008
    I think I like where this is going! Is that a bad thing?
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  • From Onikage on August 05, 2008
    AHHH!!! The wonderful third chapter!! IT'S GONE!! ;.; BRING IT BACK!! BRING IT BACK!!!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 04, 2008
    VERY interesting.
    Keep going!
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  • From serenagold on August 04, 2008
    Woo hoo!! second update! (Thank you. ^^ And thank you for the response.)


    As for encouragement, I do love where you're going with this. As I said before, its an interesting concept. I loved the fact that you have Naruto confusing aggression with sexual tension. Its a great twist and fits really well with this character.
    Keep up the great work. ^^
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  • From Raholea on August 04, 2008
    naru has issues.. and has to talk about them. i so do not feel jealous.
    and sounds like you have some interesting plans for the future. i hope i get to read more soon. thanks!!!
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