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Reviews for What is and What Should Never Be

By : QueSeraSera
  • From ANON - Ivy on August 04, 2008
    I like your first 2 chapters ^_^ The way you explained how Naruto relates pain with love and sex was really good too. I see Neji as more of a dom, but I'm sure your story will make it work with him as a sub ;-)
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  • From valencia on August 04, 2008
    ehehe, this should be good
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on August 04, 2008
    PLEASE please please post another chapter!!! This is the first time that I've found a story like this!!!! I can't wait to know what comes next! Because I also think the idea of naruto in therapy is pretty interesting! Especially because I always enjoy the most when naruto shows his secrets, and I suppose here he will have to show quite a few or get acostume to some ideas(like liking guys). And I can't wait for that to happen!!! yaaaaay
    So... PLEASE UPDATE !!!!!!!
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  • From serenagold on August 04, 2008
    What do you mean, "if there are enough reviews"? You've already written the next chapter! Post it!!!


    Why must you leave the rest of us hanging? :(

    Also, I think the idea of forcing Naruto to sit through therapy is a wonderful idea for a story. Having someone to confess his inner secrets to or force him to reevaluate his internal views is deliciously intriguing. Both these things are completely foreign to someone like Naruto who has lacked social relationships for the better part of his existence. Its an interesting idea and by poking and prodding the character with questions and assessing what the answers would be... I think you've got all the makings of a fantastic and interesting story that may lead to unexpected ventures. Naruto has a lot of issues. He many channel them towards something positive (like gaining acknowledgment, being the best ninja he can, becoming hokage..) but they are still issues that both drive and damage his psyche.

    Please don't be a story hostage when you've got something that has the potential for gold. If you want to be a writer, then write. The journey of where the story takes you will be its own reward. The reviews are merely the icing on the cake.
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - maki on August 03, 2008
    oh god that was awesome. lol. can you imagine the other characters going to therapy.


    'therapist' is spelled 'the rapist' hehehe
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  • From Onikage on August 03, 2008
    O.O *is now glued to this fic.* You have my undivided attention..

    Please, update soon!
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