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Reviews for The Boy in the Closet

By : Resting-Madness
  • From ANON - Kokoni on July 03, 2010
    I would've preferred some justice, but you can't always wrap it up neatly, ne?
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  • From ANON - Esoritoc on September 05, 2009
    GYAAAAAAAH!!! *cries* It's so angsy yet has that 'happy' ending. T.T you did a wonderful job. My only complaint is that "Yashamaru MUST die!" Though I'm sure that my own imagination can take care of that...*smirk* Thank you for your time and effort, and for deciding to share this fic.
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  • From ANON - Quirk otheTrade on August 22, 2008
    This has been a great, if disturbng read. Oh, it could use a beta reader, for those pesky tenses and stuff, but this fiction has seriously blown my mind- it hooked me and took me all night and morning to read and I don't fucking regret it one bit. Good plot and subplot. There's no sense of closure at the end, but that totally fits with the writings and writing style. Ever since I hit the end, I've had 'Running up That Hill' or 'Far Away' playing in my head for some damned reason.

    I would like one more chapter for closure. I'd want to see them all peeled out of themselves, see them judged or absolved for the things they have and haven't done. Have the house torn down, be it thirty or sixty years later, something. No secret stays buried for long; someone always finds out. You can't always fix anything, but that doesn't always matter, either.

    Either way, good show! Thank you for writing and sharing!
    ~Q
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  • From naracest on August 11, 2008
    Wow! I have to say that i didn't expect that ending. It was really good! So very very sad though. I was really happy that Naruto was coming around but then the whole business with the eyebrows...GRRRRRRR! What a jerk! When Lee was in the freezer I almost started to cry. I'm not super emotional when i read so that is quite the accomplishment. I'm glad that Lee was happy in the end. Poor Gai though. I know it seemed to work out but god, he must have been a mess until that time. This was a really wonderful story and i'm so delighted that i decided to read it and that you posted it. I look forward to reading more of your work.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From Twiggies on August 09, 2008
    Wow. Really good chapters!
    The trips where the family went (+ Naruto) was good. xD

    Wow, what an ending!
    Lee became like Gaara? And he was there in the house all the time they were looking for him?
    Awesome ending.. A little sad for the new family, but good anyways.
    And I'm glad Neji's father got out of the prison.

    I have to say it once again: Really good story, and a really good and exciting ending!
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  • From ednama on August 08, 2008
    OMG! the end was so very sad! *sniffles* That was a very good story, if heartbreaking... I'm a bit mad that neither Kiba not Yashamaru got what they deserved but well, that's life...

    I'm sad I won't have my daily dose of that fic anymore... can't wait to see your new Gaara/Lee!
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  • From ANON - mecha on August 08, 2008
    beutiful story. canèt wait for more
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  • From ednama on August 07, 2008
    Man, I love this story, so original! But please tell me that Lee is going to kick some ass at some point (preferably Kiba's... what a jerk) 'cause everytime I read the highschool stuff I wanna curls up and die, seriously. Those kids are horrible, I really hope that suchs specimen of teenagers are the sole product of your imagination and not based on something that exists.

    My favorite pairing is Lee/Gaara (damn Gaara is a gost.oh, well, they're still cuteh). I don't mind narusasu and I don't give a rat's ass about Neji's whereabout (heh, sorry), but I'm kindof sad that Gaara does not get along with his siblings, because I really, really like sandsibs fics. *sigh*

    anyway, awesome story! and I love the fast updates too! *thumbs up*

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  • From naracest on August 05, 2008
    Aha! So you are my review twin, eh? Excellent, excellent!! I laughed so hard when Naruto was walking home with Sasuke. Oh my freaking god! Sasuke has it so bad but who would want to admit it when Naruto is acting like that! Adonis! Psh. Well, okay, maybe he is but sasuke will never tell him that! I was pretty pissed at how Naruto dismissed Lee though. The guy puts the word jerk into the phrase 'being a jerk to sasuke's brother Lee!' It really works for the story but it is OOC. I hope he comes around. Naruto believes in ghosts...will help Lee track down the elusive Gaara?
    Awww, poor lee. Gaara is just so cruel to him. I'm glad the family is at least trying to be supportive, even if they don't believe him.
    *applies serious face*
    I can't believe what the Sand siblings did to him!!! Monsters! Monsters i say. no wonder gaara's so vindictive. I hope he finds peace...or finds them to haunt!!!!! Great stuff! Are you on any other sites? You should check out Y!gallery. I'm on there, ff and Lj with the same name. If you sign up to them let me know! Keep rockin' this story!!!
    Cheers
    meg
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  • From Twiggies on August 05, 2008
    Gaara's so creepy, freaky evil little devil. XD
    I love him. Poor Lee though!
    Neji must think he is crazy.
    But Gai and Lee just continues to be youthful!

    Heh, Shika's interested in Neji?
    I don't wonder why, Neji has already fed him his food, next steps should go fast enough. XD
    And then their parents won't be the only ones to have loud sex in tghe middle of night..
    Neji DOES have some kind of double bed right?

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    Really good story. XD
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  • From naracest on August 04, 2008
    Good stuff!!!!!!!!!!! I feel so bad for poor little Lee. I hope he finds someone to kick ass and take names with him. Well...kick ass and take names youthfully with him. Gaara's so evil!!!! Will he be youthful with Lee? god i'm so lame. Naruto's a bit of a jerk but Kiba...ooooooh he's cruisin' for a bruisin'. What an ass! can i kick him in teeth? Can someone kick him in the teeth. I love kiba but he needs an ass whoopin' in this story!
    Keep those chapter's coming!!!
    Cheers
    meg
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  • From Twiggies on August 04, 2008
    Hehehe. XD
    Neji really is blunt. :D
    "Last night our fathers had sex."
    Haha, poor Lee! XD

    Wonderful chapters once again!
    I like them all; Sasuke, Neji, Lee... Naruto and Shika. :D
    Really cute. :D

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    Oh and.. Poor Lee, he was trapped? Heh..
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  • From Twiggies on August 03, 2008
    Heh, really good fic so far, still. XD
    Gaara really doesn't want the new family to move in to the house does he?
    He's kinda scary, but.. somehow cute. XD

    I'm glad Sasuke and Neji are getting along with each other.
    Actually I'm glad they ALL get along.

    So they will be attending the new school soon? Sasuke and Neji I mean.
    Can't wait. XD

    Oh an BTW, the tapes in the doors and such for Neji were cool. Very considerating.

    I'm glad you updated so soon.
    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    Loving this.
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  • From ednama on August 03, 2008
    I like it so far! interesting and original!
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  • From Twiggies on August 03, 2008
    Oh my!
    I can't wait till you write more!
    Awesome fic. :D
    Never read anything like this before.
    Mmmm, Kakashi and Gai adopting Sasuke and Neji?
    PLUS Lee. ;D That's awesome.
    And Neji's father is in prison because of his bastard twin? Oh no... Cool! XDD

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
    Can't wait to read more.
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