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Reviews for First Lines

By : ShipperTrish
  • From JiraiyasStudent on September 16, 2008
    I love the way you used a line from the manga as the first line in the drabbles. That was cute! Good job! Nicely written!
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  • From rallybabe89 on August 29, 2008
    this entire thing is filled with innuendos isn't it? priceless shipper trish! great job
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2008
    You still have not disappointed yet! Okay, maybe just a little...finish "What the New Year Brings" would you! J/K As usual, your fic is AWESOME!! I love this pairing!!! Great job!
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  • From nimblnymph on August 05, 2008
    Sweeeeeet! You posted it here, too. It's still a marvelously fun read, no matter which site it's on.

    I don't think I've commented yet on Line #6's snippet, so here it goes:

    1. Hot.
    2. HOT.
    3. HOOOOOOOOT!!!

    Chair sexing is delicious. Kakashi gets brownie points for NOT grabbing the back of her head. *shivers* Thank you for stating to any man who might happen upon your work that WOMEN HAAAAAATE THAT! If I could put "hate" in bold to more clearly emphasize the point, I would. We're already blowing you. Do you REALLY want us to choke to death on your dick? Nooooo. That would mean you're into necrophilia, which is just wrong.

    Anyway, off THAT tangent... Very well written, very sexy, and a wonderful use of those lines. I kinda figured you'd do something like this for the chair line. Or, rather, I was HOPING you would. You write some amazing smut.

    In other news: HAHAHA!!!! Biddy references always amuse me! That poor, poor chair though...
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