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Reviews for Training with Itachi

By : botonchan
  • From Veja24 on May 02, 2009
    "Otouto" means "little brother", so don't use it as Sasuke's nickname for Itachi. Although "Niisan" means "brother", I have never hear older one calling his younger brother Niisan. Perhaps you should avoid making Itachi call Sasuke Niisan. Use Sasuke's name instead, or endearment "Otouto".
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2008
    dum dum dum!
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  • From ANON - Maki on August 06, 2008
    er nice story and all but you need to check you coding or something (bear with me i don't know how posting works) cause its really awkward to read. the middle is all italics not just the thoughts, you're missing ALOT of punctuations and you're mixing up your 'niisan', 'aniki' and 'otouto'(sp? whatever you get the idea) again. your other chapters were fine (well exept what i told you in my last review) so i know it's not completely you ^___^
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 05, 2008
    Interesting...
    Can't wait for the punishment!
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  • From Dream2010 on August 03, 2008
    Can't wait til Sasuke winning the little game! ^ ^
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 01, 2008
    Very intriguing! This is very promising!
    Update!
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  • From ANON - maki on August 01, 2008
    great start hope you update soon so i don't forget all about this. in your last paragraph you made itachi call sasuke nii-san instead of otouto. no biggie ^_^
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  • From bowy on August 01, 2008
    A good start. I look forward to the next chapter
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  • From Aikotina on August 01, 2008
    ne ne; its a good start and seems like a nice plot; but just so you know 'niisan' is japanese for 'older brother' so only sasuke would use this term for itachi and not vice versa. 'otouto' means 'little brother' but in an almost detached sense; like introducing him as your little brother and not actually speaking to him. just thought i'd let you know. please update soon!
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