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Reviews for Eye of the Beholder

By : PrplGrl
  • From AngelTalion on March 09, 2011
    So who are the ones stalking Shika back to his apartment and RAGING across the landing from Iruka's? Don't tell me this is DONE?
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  • From sangohoushi on July 22, 2009
    what what what!!! i wanna know who's seething outside Iruka's door. im thinking kakashi....but of course, i wont really know until you update.

    please update now soon
    ^_^''


    *CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*f
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  • From LadyLaran on October 22, 2008
    I can't wait to see more of this! I loved the Gentle Fist series and hope that maybe you'll do a sequel for that with Sai and Shika.
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  • From ANON - eve4mem on September 29, 2008
    I reread it agian ^_^ and I still like it. But it's been a while since it was posted, please update? I'm wondering if that jealous person was jealous at Iruka or at Shika because there was two people in that kiss not just one. I'm hoping it's an Iruka fic, he's my favorite cutie ^_~ And it did seem to be centered around him. Either way I can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - No One Of Importance on August 19, 2008
    Could you PLEASE update this story, I really REALLY want to know what happens... I love the way you've started out by the way. It's got intrigue in it.

    KUDOS!!!
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  • From animelovergirl on August 06, 2008
    More, more, more...*wiggles impatiently in her chair*...ahem, please ^_^
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  • From ANON - LonelyDove on August 05, 2008
    So sad =( update it sounds good =D =D
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  • From mizukiruhoh on August 05, 2008
    I love this story! man! i didn't think I had a Shika/Iruka kink but wow! oh my god! please continue. I need to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Stinky Horowitz on August 01, 2008
    I had a great time reading your story and look forward to more. I'm really curious about who was in the forest watching and who will end up together at the end. I think your story was well written minus a couple of niggling details. I think that using "orbs" instead of the more ordinary "eyes" is a little precious, too romance novel style. And calling Iruka "the Umino" is just too strange. Just "Umino" would be better, although "Iruka" would be best; it's not as though you overused his name. Those were the only details that distracted me from your story. Thank you for writing; I'll look for updates.
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on August 01, 2008
    Hm...Now who is the angry jonin? Pls have it be Kakashi! As for Shikmaru-well is it Neji by any perchance?
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  • From RyuEarth on August 01, 2008
    O.O this is so cool! I can't wait to see who the jounin is! =)
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  • From Gingitsune32 on August 01, 2008
    Hmmm......jealous Kakashi?! ^^

    Shika and Iruka? Interesting pairing and I can't wait to read more! ^^
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  • From ANON - Sanee on August 01, 2008
    Ooh, double Pineapple-head action!
    Shikamaru's just good in pretty much any shounen-ai/yaoi pairing.
    -Patiently awaits update on Earth Angel-
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  • From CurtisZidaneZiraa on August 01, 2008
    Crack this may be, but it's hilarious! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2008
    I'd never considered this pairing before but you've made it work so far. The date was really sweet and having the spontaneous date all planned out was classic Shikamaru. I hope that you continue this so that we can find out who the angry observers were.
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