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Reviews for The Fall of the Dogs of War

By : dolphina23
  • From ItaNarulover on November 01, 2008
    You don't have to thank me for telling the truth while reviewing, you know, you should be proud of yourself, to be able to write in this amazing way. Not only can you write you know, but you have quite the imagination as well. I've actually started writing a fic myself, but I'm really bad at it so I never seem to finish it O///O(me blushing). So I know talent when I see it, cause it is incredibly hard to write, so you deserve all the compliments you get ;)
    Anyway...on to the reviewing of the chapter itself, I can easily say that this chapter was one of the best chapters of this fic. I really loved the ending. It was perfect. And your descriptions of Naruto, Hinata and Sasuke left me speachless again. I liked that you made Hinata brave enough to tell Naruto about her true feelings, as well as how vulnerable Naruto is at the moment, the way he acts, and that Sasuke realized that he does feel something for Naruto. The first thing that came to my mind, after reading the chapter, was "awww.." XD cause I found it really cute.
    And I don't mind if I have to wait for a while to read the next chapters, because I totally understand why. It takes a lot of one's freetime to write fics/novels/chapters etc. and you do want to do other stuff as well, not just write fanfics all day ;)
    As they say in Sweden "you never wait too long, when you wait for something good". I don't know if other countries use this saying as well but we use it quite a lot here in Sweden, ok maybe not a lot, but it is a known saying :)
    Anyway.......with that I mean that I'll be happy as long as you update, no matter how long it'll take.
    So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From Halskr on November 01, 2008
    I really enjoyed this chapter. It was nice to see Hinata be brave and admit her feelings towards Naruto. I also enjoyed the way Sasuke is acting here. Kakashi just steamrolling over him and his actions during the festival. It was nice that he wasnt all possesive, and he just waited to see what would happen. The ending of the chapter was very touching and emotional.
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  • From serenagold on October 28, 2008
    Gah!!! So much has happened between the last two chapters, that I am in need of a break because of the emotional rollercoaster I just sat through. My god. Can't wait for your next updated. This really is an amazing story.


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From maggiekebs on October 25, 2008
    Once again, excellent work! I managed to hold out for two chapters this time, of course I still wanted more at the end of it. You almost had me in tears for poor Naruto. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - fish on October 23, 2008
    WOW....this an amazing story i cant wait for the next chap
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  • From ItaNarulover on October 21, 2008
    Oh god, I loved this chapter. I've got tears in my eyes while writing this review, poor Naruto.
    That does it, this is now my favorite story here. It can't be compared to other fics, because it's so unfic-like. It's like a really good book, or like the real manga in word-form. I think that you're amazing, because you can write so convincingly and so correctly, that it leaves me spechless and amazed.
    The way you describe everything, Naruto's feelings and his apperence now as broken, it's amazing. I don't know what to say almost because I'm so amazed right now..
    I can't wait for the next chapter. And I know it will be awesome like every chapter has been so far.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From Halskr on October 21, 2008
    I've said it before on another forum and I'll say it here. This story is very rich in details and plot. I like how you have given the elements and characters your own personal spin. I really enjoyed reading this, and can't wait to read more to find out what is happening to Naruto, Sasuke, and the Kyuubi. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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  • From ItaNarulover on October 16, 2008
    Not only are you an amazing writer you're evil as well ;P. That was so evil of you to end the chapter like that, Naruto lying on the ground unconcious!
    But nevertheless, I loved it! Poor Naruto, Minato and Kushina. :( I'm glad the bastard, Hiroku, died, what a jerkface.
    Anyway, I hope that Sasuke will find Naruto and take care of him until he gets better...aww...*happy thoughts*
    Can't wait for the next chpater, you evil one ;P, so keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From Ljiljana on October 16, 2008
    As there is no single word of mine in this chapter, I feel free to comment here where everyone can see it. =D

    My heart was bleeding together with Naruto's wounds. You didn't go too far, just enough to make sure we know aware he is surviving hell. I love how Naruto got to see his parents, even if it was in such unfortunate time. I bet he will remember that smile he saw on his mother's face until the rest of his life. I like the appearance of Fugaku - as you already know. :P I love how you did Minato, too.

    The descriptions were beautiful - yeah, I know it's an awkward word considering what was it that you were describing, but it's fitting. And I simply adored the ending of the chapter, how Kyuubi worked with Naruto, helped him escape. It was actually touching.

    Your writing is more and more beautiful with every chapter you send me, and I simply can't wait for the next part. So go now and write some more! :P

    (Sorry about that, I forgot to log in as me)
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  • From maggiekebs on October 03, 2008
    I tried to hold out so I would have two chapters to read, but I couldn't. Your story is too appealing ^_^ Kakashi found Sakura's dead body so no miraculous recovery for her. Bye bye Sakura! Poor Kakashi, someone else to mourn.
    Keep up the good work!









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  • From serenagold on October 02, 2008
    Oh shit! Naruto went crazy on Konan and totally defeated her, but, like in the randomness of all war, he was taken out by some random dude's cheap shot. Yikes!! Then that other guy kidnaps him??!! I hope Kakashi and Hinata can find him in time. Or maybe the Kyuubi will come back to revive him!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on September 24, 2008
    WOW. That chapter was seriously intense!!


    THere are so few people who can capture an original battle that is not only interesting to read but intelligent too. You've succeeded in both accounts. ^^
    Keep up the excellent work!
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  • From maggiekebs on September 24, 2008
    Good chapter, can't help wishing for more. Poor Sakura, are we going to see a little more of her b4 she dies or is there some miraculous recovery waiting in the wings? He he, I love to speculate. Thanks again for sharing, update soon please.
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  • From Arcueido on September 24, 2008
    Hi, I couldn't help but read on because of the writing skills displayed in this one. Good job so far and yes it is rare for fanfics around here to display more plot than sex. Although you shouldn't let plot lengthiness bother you, there are some areas where you could economise your words. It would make reading flow smoother and though I myself am a lover of words, I find the human imagination works better with straight forward descriptions rather than lengthy ones. For example, you mentioned at one point about Sakura's organs shifting upon removal of the white sheet. You mention them shifting again along with spilling further down. You could remove the second "shifting" part and just retain spilling.

    The above is not mandatory or cruicial and I might only be enforcing my own writing styles upon you. So do feel free to ignore me if you wish. However, overall a nice read and I do look forward to future updates from you.
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  • From ItaNarulover on September 24, 2008
    You know, every review that I've given you so far has mostly started with a "holy shit!" or "omg!", and I think I will continue doing that for a long time ;P
    cause damn your chaps are awesome. I totally loved this chapter, poor Sakura, my eyes got quite teary when I read the part about her dying. And poor Naruto, getting stabbed in the lung, ouch, to save Sasuke. Loved it.
    Can't wait for the next chapter!.
    Luv you!
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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