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Reviews for The Fall of the Dogs of War

By : dolphina23

From ItaNarulover on December 12, 2008
Are you seriously trying to kill me?!
Two chapters in less than a day and the contents of those chapters!?
That was.....I'm almost speachless...it was so incredible. I'm shaking right now, and my eyes are teary. Damn..
These chapters really touched me, everything was perfect. Absolutly perfect.
The part where Naruto got his fingers cut off, and the ending part of the last chapter were really sentimental. My eyes got teary and I was close to crying. I feel so sorry for Naruto and Sasuke. They've been through so much.
The male on male part was actually one of the best (sorry for using the term) "lemons" I've ever read, because of it's credibility. It showed that the first time isn't always pleasant, that it actually does hurt, and that it might continue hurting. Most authors fail to do that during their "lemons", they tend to make the guy bottoming experience everything as pleasant, only that the initial penetration might hurt. So thanks for showing us a better and more credible point of view. It only made the fic more real.
And on top of that it was quite hot. Being the pervert that I am, I totally drooled XD. haha.
And I also really liked the part where Sasuke said that the council made Itachi hate himself and his parents. I'm a huge Itachi fan and that made my eyes get teary too. Poor Itachi.
Thank you.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up with the good work as always.
Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
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From serenagold on December 12, 2008
Training. The filled in blank is going to be "training" isn't it? I'm on to you with your evil and sadistic ways. �_� hehehe ^^

Keep up the good work!
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From jordash00 on December 11, 2008
Ok, so those people won't be reprimanded? They need to die!
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From ItaNarulover on December 08, 2008
Sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I've been away. And I didn't have any access to the Internet. Yes, that really sucked, I know.
I love both of your fics and I'm really suprised that more people aren't reviewing. You deserve the credit, you really do, especially when you're going through the trouble of writing them and posting them on the site. And since your chapters always are detailed, you must have spent a lot of time writing them. So, forgive me. And please remember that there are people who appreciate you and your fics.
A lot of people are just too lazy to write reviews, I'm not one of them though, I like to write them because I know that the author appreciate it. And it's kinda fun too.. ;P
And now, onto the reviewing of the new chapter.
This chapter was really cute. I really loved the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. I especially like the piano part, and when Naruto writes kanji on Sasuke's hand. So cute.
And the more I read the fic, the more I begin to like Sasuke. He's so credible eventhough he's changing. I would like to see this side of him in the real manga.
And of course, being the pervert that I am, the sensual interaction between the two, rocked. I'm excitingly waiting for more. XD
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
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From ANON - sneayfox on December 08, 2008
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Naruto and Sasuke are so cute with one anotehr. =^^=
That nightmare of his, was howver, really scary. Great job all around on the chapter.

As for the A/N.. I do agree with you that there are a lot of stories on here with ubsurd rape stories. Personally, I love rape and abuse fics, but only because its gives the characters something insurmountable to overcome and because it is an obstical that drastically changes their characters on a believeable level. Its a horror and a struggle.

Stories in which the characters go from rape to love in 0.2 seconds loose my interest just as quickly. Keep up the great work and don't hold back on your stories for reviews. Beging for reviews has a tendency to stop active reviewers from reviewing. I hate it when authors keep a story hostage when they don't get a certin number of reviews. :(
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From jordash00 on December 08, 2008
I have enjoyed this story since the beginning! Sorry about being selfish and not reviewing!
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From abhorsen3 on December 03, 2008
That was just so sweet, Sasuke can try and fight it but his feeling for Naruto just get stronger and they are perfect together ^_^

I liked how you introduced the sign language in this chapter, it fits the story perfectly!! I think this is the second story I've read where Naruto doesn't talk and uses sign language, I don't know why but I like the idea.

Naruto a music genius, I don't think anybody expected that! I love the piano and I think it goes well with how your developing the story and Naruto and Sasuke's relationship.

Looking forward to the next chapter, I really love this story.

Abhorsen3 ^_^
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From serenagold on December 03, 2008
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!

These last two chapters were perfect! Incredible! Gah!
I'd review more, but reading this has made me late for work.
Keep up the great work!
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From ANON - animelover on December 02, 2008
ya know, i've always prided myself on being able to admit when i'm wrong .. so here i am! i cannot believe i actually was put off of this story simply beccause of the title. it's not a bad one, just didn't catch my eye. so today i read and am thinking YEAH BABY!!!!!

omg, this is such a totally cool fic and i'm so ashamed i'm just now reading it. you're doing a really good job and i promise to keep a close eye out for updates. ;-)
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From ItaNarulover on November 19, 2008
Well, this chapter was not what I had expected, I don't mean that in a bad way though.
You got to see more from a Sasuke-point of view, and I think that you made a really good job of making him stay in character.
And I got so pleased when they kissed, I totally squealed out loud. I had been curious to see when there would be some SasuNaru-fluff, and now my curiosity is sated ;P
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up with the good work, as always ;P
Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
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From Ljiljana on November 18, 2008
Okay, so this has to be the absolutely best training-turns-into-kissing scene I've ever read. Not only it was beautifully written, I could just see it clearly in my head, like I was watching a movie.
It figures that, even broken, Naruto is stronger then Sasuke when it comes to emotion and love. He always will be the stronger one. But if he talked, the chapter would have probably ended up with a huge fight and I want to see them train again. Soon. From Sasuke's pov! XD

And you know what I think of Grape Valley. =D
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From serenagold on November 14, 2008
Sasuke thinks the world revolves around him.

Can't wait to see what happens in their little vacation spot by the sea. Keep up the good work!
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From ItaNarulover on November 12, 2008
It always makes me happy to know that my reviews are appreciated. And like I said before, no need to thank me or anything, I'm just stating a fact ;P
This chapter, to me, showed your more poetic side, I think. The chapter was like a dream, romanticly written, detailed, just with a nice flow and easy-going-ness. It's hard to explain, but I really enjoyed it.
I also think that you portrayed Kakashi really well, I totally see him like the way you described him. ;P
And I really like Sasuke in this fic, you seem to justify him in a way, which is good because it makes it easier for me to like him. And I feel so sorry for Naruto, you're able to portray his emotions really well. It's so enjoyable to read, honestly.
I'm greatful for the quick update, I thought I would have to wait longer :) so thank you! It made me really happy.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing,(this fic and your novel).
Take care. Hugs
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From serenagold on November 01, 2008
Aw, a sad Naruto always makes me down. ;(

Great chapter. You are an excellent writer. If you ever finish your novel, make sure you provide a link to it. ^^
Keep up the great work!
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From ANON - abhorsen3 on November 01, 2008
I have to say that it has been a very long time since I've read such a great story!!

I love the way you're portraying their characters and the way the story is developing. I've been trying to see if I can see where you're going with this story but with every chapter I read I realised that whatever I thought of was not anywhere as good as what you'd writen.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter now and I can't wait till you update, I know you've heard it before but I really love this story ^_^
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