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Reviews for The Fall of the Dogs of War

By : dolphina23
  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on March 10, 2009
    Wow...

    Just wow.

    This has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read in Naruto fanfiction. Ever. Nothing compares to how REAL you make this story. The characters stay in character, the plot is very interesting and nothing is poorly or over-exageratedly written. Fantastic, absolutely fantastic. You put so much effort and it truly pays off.

    I have to commemorate Sasuke and Naruto's realtionship most of all. Their feelings, I can pratically feel for myself. Very logical way of writing their characters. Meaning, I could actually see this happening in canon. And the first sex scene was done so beautifully and so REALISTICALLY.

    I love it, abosolutely love it.

    Gure-pu sawa really brings a sense of peace and escape. I loved imagining that village as well. I wish they had stayed :P

    Please please update soon! Your story is like air to me now.


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  • From on March 08, 2009
    Once again the stories lookin' good...I've read all the chapters lol
    But yea I see what you were saying in your review to me but I can't really help it since I pretty much write like that all the time (I think the reason I do that is because I don't organize my plot before I write it and do nothing to it afterwards). Also, I don't have a beta and can't get one so I can't really do anything about it! No one reads my stories so it's hard to advertise for one.

    Secondly: The story is all in Naruto's pov (or at least I thought it was)
    I just spaced it because I see that often and sometimes sentences look jumbled and boring to me to I skip lines to keep it empty. ( I have astigmatism badly so I can't see things if it's too much writing all in one place)

    Third: Thanks and if you see anything else I'd be glad to here it, you sound really expirenced!
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  • From Ljiljana on March 07, 2009
    O_O

    You as well should be sorry for keeping that hot little piece if SASUKE BOTTOMING from me! Gah! Incoherence attacked me!

    (just for a minute there, have no fear XD)

    hehe, must say I was very surprised both Naruto and Sasuke went through first round easily. >.> hehe. No, but the next chapter should be really exciting, I can't wait to see what you have in mind. There was just one little thing... I know Naruto clones were keeping guard, but i don't think fire was such a good idea, if they were trying to lay low. But well. When someone is capable as two of them are, it doesn't really make a difference.

    Can't wait the next part. You are already writing it, right? Right? =D
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  • From on March 07, 2009
    Omg! I am in love with this story and your way of writing! Can you do me a favor and critique mines? I think of myself as a "soft writer" and I wanna change it so HELP! Expirenced Sempai's are always welcomed and loved!
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  • From serenagold on February 18, 2009
    Woo hoo! The next chapter sounds like a lot of fun. ^^

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Ljiljana on February 16, 2009
    The decision to show them watching that tape from Sasuke's pov in the beginning is pure genius. I love it, because Naruto should be overflown with emotions, not able to think clearly, see all the details. And /then/, you introduced us to the whirlwind of his thoughts and feelings, after we managed to see through Sasuke's eyes what's on the tape. Pure genius, I tell you.

    Minato and Kushina are just as I would like them to be.

    Compering mother's hug with Iruka's was so sad and beautiful, it almost made me tear up. Seriously. Poor Naruto.

    Uh. I didn't like seeing Tsunade apologizing like that. It's nothing with your writing, it just felt... wrong... for the Hokage to ask for forgiveness. In my eyes, she should be a politician first, and if she wanted a personal moment, she was not suppoused to take it in her office, seconds after giving Naruto an order. Though I believe she would have done that exactly.

    The training-fight thing with Kakashi was solid, if a bit hard to follow. (That's probably just me, I have this awful dislike for long paragraphs.)

    And, and! The chunin exams! ABOUT TIME, TOO! XDDD

    Great chapter, my dear. I enjoyed reading it.


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  • From jordash00 on February 16, 2009
    It amazes me the characters you have created here in Sasuke and Naruto. I can't even explain it. They are soooooooo different from thier portrayal in the manga and anime, yet sooooooooo perfect for this story. I love this story and am glad that you update frequently.
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  • From ItaNarulover on January 23, 2009
    Yay, I'm someone's favorite reviewer! *cheers*
    But I wouldn't review if you'd write bad fics, now would I? So all the credit's for you, really.. ;P
    And you make me want to review! XD Especially since I know it's appreciated.
    This chapter was also very cute although I'm starting to get pissed at Sasuke again. How can you not answer when Naruto says "I love you" you idiot? Poor Naruto, if Sasuke keeps acting like that Naruto might just think he's just after his body or something. Whatever he might think he surely will be hurt again, especially with that asshole Danzou and the evil villagers being after him.
    And I loved the talk between Kakashi and Sasuke. I love Kakashi. By the way, have you read the manga? *despaired*
    And the "lemon"....OMG. Hot, hot, hot! *drools*
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    Keep up with the good work as always and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From Ljiljana on January 22, 2009
    Ramen sooo counts! Stupid Sasuke.

    Good, I liked the last bit, with the two of them bantering about silly little things. It felt domestic. And the book thing, I hope Sasuke is going to read it. In manga, I mean. =D
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  • From serenagold on January 21, 2009
    Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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  • From serenagold on December 28, 2008
    Aww :)


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  • From ANON - animelover on December 28, 2008
    hey there! finally got caught up, and must say well done. the explanation kakashi gave naru was kinda cool .. don't know that i've read anything like it. ;-)

    keep it up!
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  • From blugirlami21 on December 16, 2008
    I like this story, I like all your stories really. I like that this story has recent elements of the manga and you managed to include SasuNaru which is always nice. All the relationships while seemingly different to how they are in the series have the same core to them. How Kakashi feels about his students is the same but you have added new things and there is a much larger closeness and emotion to his relationship with them. You seem to like torturing Naruto in all your stories really but you always manage to give him a support. The relationship between Sasuke and Naruto is great. It has realness because not everything is perfect, the both make mistakes and the both have serious issues with love and commitment and it shows through sometimes. I'm looking forward to what will happen next.
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  • From Ljiljana on December 12, 2008
    I don't think we ever discussed, and this is as good place as any, your titles, and how much I absolutely adore them. Whenever you send my a new chapter, even when I don't have time to read it right away, I just have to open it to see the new chapter title. They inspire me so much.

    I was very disappointed you decided not to do that for the other two stories, I have to say, though I see why it wouldn't work as well.

    Thank you, once again, for contributing to this fandome something not only readable, but utterly brilliant; the greatest quality possible.
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  • From serenagold on December 12, 2008
    5 stars. Thats what this chapter earns. (Plus, maybe like, one extra star for the quick update.)

    Oh, and bonus stars for the awkward, painful inexperienced sex. I wasn't expecting Sasuke's freakout at the end, but it worked so well and I loved the switch up of Naruto becoming the strong one in their relationship. Naruto's been such a reck that its easy to see that Sasuke's just as equally fucked up, even if he doesn't show it.

    Keep up the excellent work! ^^
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