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Reviews for Inner Obstacle

By : ednama
  • From Sheemashelin on November 29, 2008
    So I'm not trying to rush you but at the same time I am. I'm itching for the next chapter... *sigh* I hope it is coming soon I'm all kinds of excited for it. (I keep rating it at +++++ ^^") I'm bad I know but I want more people to read it and review it. Well I await you're next chapter.

    ~Zim
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  • From Sheemashelin on November 23, 2008
    Okay now that I'm not screeching like a fan girl... ^^" I'll give you a real review. First Chapter: At first I thought for a hot second that Naruto already knew he liked Gaara. And the way he tried to escape Hokage duty all the time.. lol. And Gaara, the image you gave me drool worthy really.(Even though it was with someone who wasn't Naruto.) The mean things that Naru said to Gaara... I think fit very well the blond idiot..*rolls eyes.* He is so dense. The way that the other delegates are all like holy shit wtf? I like that too. Second Chapter: Gaara's interaction with the kids is great and some of the phrases you used to describe the moments with the kids, so dead on.(I have one of my own it freaking made me laugh so hard.) The way Gaara has to do something to try not to think but he ends up doing it anyway. I was like Nyu~ Gaara Naruto's an idiot! I like that the other Kages of the other nations are like we have to stop them from fighting. Chapter Three: What is there to say... I loved the whole thing. The fight was spectacular. And I died laughing, even though I probably shouldn't have been, when Gaara imitated Naru. Yeah... I think that's the best chapter so far. The dejection that Naru feels after what he did sinks in.. wow. I think that it's so in character. Gaara freaking out on Naru, I think it was great and something that Gaara would do as well. I love this story so much. I hope you update soon. I'm seriously stuck on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter. And well I went back through ever chapter and rated this at a +++++. And well I've told all my friends and linked them to it. It's that good. *bows to your writing awesome-ness.*
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  • From Sheemashelin on November 22, 2008
    PLease finish.... more please.... I want to know what happens.... So bad.... *sobs* PLEASE!!!!! I want to pets them!! And like conk them on the head!! *screams* You must finish I'm dying to know!! *spazes out.*
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  • From tovah on November 07, 2008
    I love this sooooo much please please I beg you to update as soon as you can. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - IvvyMoon on October 30, 2008
    Yes, a horribly ending sequel would KILL me! Don't do it! Don't, don't, don't, don', don't! Please! Ack, I almost don't want to read this anymore thinking it'll all end in tears. It's childish and immature of me, but I HATE sad endings, and since I'm really enjoying this fic, please do not ruin it for me by endings things poorly. Please.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on October 26, 2008
    glad its been updated finally. Please keep up the good work and update soon
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  • From on October 26, 2008
    This one(Inner Circle)happy ending please. Then a sequel where everything goes bad if you must.
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  • From on October 26, 2008
    hope Naruto can hold his tongue, lol asking to much, when Gaara confronts him after the letter. look forward to reading what happens next. Nice fic.
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  • From Prism0467 on October 25, 2008
    I'm fine with either ending, as long as Gaara is with Naruto.
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  • From LadyPiro on October 25, 2008
    Ack! Happyending!Happyending!Happyending!Happyending!Happyending!

    p.s....Gaara doing impressions of Naruto? I know it was a bad time, but man...I nearly laughed my head off..
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  • From LunakaWren on October 24, 2008
    Hell yes it would bother me!!!
    Stories should always have happy endings, even if the ride is rough as all hell.
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  • From ANON - aoh on September 14, 2008
    yaaaay! can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Traybell on August 26, 2008
    great chapters really like your story so far. wonder what naruto is banging on the door about poor gaara is nervous. hope you continue and write chap 3.
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  • From LunakaWren on August 19, 2008
    Damn! Good fic!

    I love how Gaara's more worn out by his niece and nephew than by his enemies...but he and Naruto have to make up!

    Now!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on August 18, 2008
    aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhh. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UDAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
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