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Reviews for Reise zu Reinkarnation

By : RotSeele
  • From goodchaos on February 01, 2009
    I love This fic! Give me more!!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on January 19, 2009
    lol. right on! so who is sas gonna go see?
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on January 07, 2009
    awwww. how sweet! can't wait for more!
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  • From asm613 on December 12, 2008
    Naruto promised to keep Sasuke safe and then LET the hunter nin beat the shit out of him. Naruto broke his ninja code_he broke his promise to protect Sasuke from getting hurt.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 12, 2008
    NOOOOOO! SASUKE! haha poor guy
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  • From missbri88 on December 08, 2008
    wow... Unexpected... cant wait for more. ^^
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 08, 2008
    well thats interesting. just a quick question, Uchiha is itachi right and not just some part of sasuke?
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  • From DemonBlood on November 13, 2008
    I'm sorry, but I don't really like your story. The main reason is because of the unbridled OOCness of the characters (especially Hinata, what's up with that?). I know out of character behavior is common and expected in fan fiction, especially alternate universe stories like yours, but your characterization of the Naruto cast doesn't resemble the originals in the least. The only things that stayed faithful were their names. If you had given the reader an opportunity to understand why the characters were so drastically changed, like with a prologue, then their OOC behavior could've had real meaning. It was very difficult to follow the story with all the changes you made to their world, if you had taken less liberties, and simplified a few things, the plot would have made more sense. Any good fan work is rooted firmly in the original media it was biased off of, no matter what changes said fan chooses to make. I think you would benefit from reading the manga again to get a better handle on the characters you're trying to write about. I couldn't read past the fifth chapter because of the OOCness. On a positive note, your sense of timing is on point and your writing style flows very well. There where some grammatical errors, but a beta could fix them for you easily. You have some decent ideas, and with some retooling, your story has potential. As it is right now though, I can't give it a positive review. Keep working hard, this is a good opportunity for growth!
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  • From Dream2010 on October 18, 2008
    Interesting so far. update soon!
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  • From Dragon7 on October 17, 2008
    Fantastic chapter keep up the good work.
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  • From Dragon7 on September 02, 2008
    I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
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  • From Dragon7 on July 23, 2008
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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  • From yolotengo on July 18, 2008
    Very dark beginning but very good. I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
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  • From ItaNarulover on July 17, 2008
    Wow!
    This seems to be the begining of an amazing fic, I really really loved this one.
    I can't wait for the next chapter to get updated.
    Thanks for writing it, you made my day.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From Dragon7 on July 17, 2008
    Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

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