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Reviews for Life Before Life After

By : anlaaria
  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on September 05, 2008
    Nice! I just fell in love with this story. Not only is filled with good writing, it also has a nice balance of humor and drama. Definitely will be back for more chapters.
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  • From serenagold on August 31, 2008
    I wasn't sure about reading this, since at first I took the summary as just another "Sasuke's back and ready to redeem himself to Naruto" stories.. but after taking the time to read it, I'm really glad I did. This is really a one of a kind story with a fantastic plot. Naruto is much more subdued and mature in this and I think those changes speak volumes about his personality. You can still see hints of his happy, mischievous, boastful and crafty personality in this, but its highly played down, like he's finally accepted himself and stopped acting. Yes, there's pain and yes, he's still coming to terms with Sasuke's return and new relationship, but its all very real and I appreciate that. Sasuke too is excellently crafted. The way he views himself and comes to term with his life, what he did, and his future is interesting. The need to punish oneself in little ways is one of the most believeable faults in his personality that I see few other authors capitalize on or explore. Its like you paint your stories with a subtle stroke and the image you convey is authentic.

    I truly am impressed and now eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

    Keep up the great work.
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  • From LadyLaran on August 31, 2008
    I'm really glad you updated this. I'm curious as to why blood instead of tears. Will you explain that later?
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  • From Bluesrabbit11 on August 31, 2008
    Please continue, I really like the story. I want to know what is next. Thanks for the hard work.
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  • From sonotgoingthere on August 31, 2008
    I'm liking the plot development, and the fact that Naruto isn't just accepting Sasuke back legs-wide-open.

    I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From DestineysMistake on August 31, 2008
    I love this story. I’ve been on the edge of my seat waiting for an update since the first chapter, and I love how well paced it is. Everyone seems so in-character.

    I’m still waiting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter to come out because this is honestly one the most worthwhile fanfics with this pairing that I’ve read in a very long time.
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  • From Halskr on August 31, 2008
    Thanks for the update on this. It was nice to see them working together. How long will Sasuke have to be on restrictions, or some more information about them would be nice.
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  • From writemenolies on August 30, 2008
    There's something eerily beautiful about the image of Sasuke crying tears of blood. Seems so fitting for him. Or maybe I'm just a little crazy;) I did get seriously turned on by a blood-spattered Johnny Depp in Sweeney Todd...but I digress. I'm really enjoying this story, it's incredibly well-written and it's obvious you're taking the time to think it out and know exactly where you're heading with each chapter. The characterizations are wonderful. I hope you update soon, but no rush! I love that you take your time and get great, quality chapters out for us!
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  • From LindyStar on July 18, 2008
    OMG! Where have you been all my life! XD You are such a great writer! I especially liked the very last scene where Sasuke is being sedated not quite successfully. Your writing is eloquent and spicy, I love the characterizations and the conversations they all have. Can't wait to see where this goes; hopefully it won't be too angsty, but then again, you just can't seem to have Sasuke without a liberal helping of just that!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on July 17, 2008
    ohhhh, must hurt tsunade...must hurt.... oh yeah, that would be Naruto's job and he's not ready for it yet. Soon? And I'm sure I've said this before, but I suck at reviews. But I like it.
    Slave
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  • From solitare1 on July 17, 2008
    You have done a fantastic job so far on this story. I look forward to more. I am glad I chose to start this story, it's very good.
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  • From steisi on July 17, 2008
    Hurrah for the new chapter! I loved it. The glimpse of Naruto in his teacher habitat was a brilliant touch. And the protective ninjas-in-training amused me to no end! I liked the bit you added about Sasuke's eye-problems; as brief a mention as it was, it added realism to the story since in canon it WAS mentioned that continuous use of the Sharingan could lead to blindness and the like. And sadistic!Tsunade was SO my cup of tea! Go girl! Yes, ehem...Anywaaay, I just wanted to tell you that you did a wonderful job on this chapter, and though it was shorter than the previous one, I enjoyed it immensely nonetheless. The brief moment of admiration Sasuke spared Naruto's hair made me giggle. I hope to get to read more soon! Kisses!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on July 17, 2008
    hunh. interesting
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  • From Dragon7 on July 16, 2008
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

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  • From vanessaclarke on July 16, 2008
    Oooh! That's different, interesting and very well written. Wicked good! I'm all a-tingle with anticipation now. ;p
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