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By : Kurokit
  • From yolotengo on March 29, 2009
    Yay an update!! Loved it...very hot.
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  • From DevilnBlue on January 24, 2009
    omg, this is hilarious, hot and all of the above. I don't know whether to feel sorry for Naruto or tell him to suck it up, 'you have two hot guys lusting after you'. Oh I did feel sorry that he lost his virginity and such a way... though the blowjob under the table definetly made of for it. I am so looking forward to seeing more and am suprised I just discovered this story now. Well thank you for the good read and looking forward to more later.
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  • From ZenithB on January 24, 2009
    good story, can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From kanaro on January 23, 2009
    Oh my God! This is so hot! And Sasuke and Itachi are deliciously hot and evil and in character. I love it! Never stop writing!
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  • From MichiyoInue on January 23, 2009
    YEY AN UPDATE!!!!!!! awesomeness!!!!
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  • From juicycherry on September 11, 2008
    A Friendly Reminder

    Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it wouldn't hurt to include that this story is indeed fiction.

    Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.

    Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!

    Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^
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  • From ANON - a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h. on September 11, 2008
    Yay! Another chapter! NO! You ended it! Please write more, lol. ^_^ I am anxiously awaiting.
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  • From NiChee on September 11, 2008
    this is great! pls update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on September 11, 2008
    I really like the plot your developing ;-)
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  • From Leeana69 on August 25, 2008
    'He opened the drawer on his right and took out some lube and a spare tie.'

    Ha, my eyes played a trick on me when I was reading and I thought the word tie was the word tire and I was all 'wait, why would Itachi have a spare tire in his desk?'

    He's a mean bastard...but that's why we love him right? ^-^
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  • From OutlawAngel on August 24, 2008
    It's perfeeeect!!!!!!! I sooo wanna see Itachi and Sasuke falling in love with Naruto, but when Naruto realizes that he loves them too he finds out the truth, and he will be soo heartbroken that he runsaway with his aunt, and Itachi and Sasuke will do anything to have their litlle blond doll back!!!! AAAAAh, can't wait for more chappies, please keep up the good work.
    UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!

    YA NE!!!
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  • From KoibitoFemme on August 12, 2008
    I am certainly not disappointed but I wonder will there be a threesome. Will Naruto be able to walk or will he need to be in a wheelchair. Will he be able to hangle two at once if you choose to put him through it? I wonder... I hope you update soon.
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  • From Vibora on August 12, 2008
    the only thing that was disappointing was that there was no sasuke yet! lol now, your sex scenes seem a bit rushed i think...? great fic though! i love kisame calling him barbie xD
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  • From ANON - tiger alchemist on August 10, 2008
    This was great! I loved it. Please continue.
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  • From ItaNarulover on August 10, 2008
    *drooled to death*
    Ahh, I totally love the slightly evil Itachi. And the ItaNaru-ness is killing me! =)
    By the way, please don't tell me that it will be some ItaSasu aswell. I don't like that pairing.
    Anyway, keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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