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Reviews for Read the Fine PrintChapter OneHow it Began

By : YaoiSmutMaster
  • From mokomokosama on March 26, 2010
    Oh. My. God. that was so funny!!!
    i just found your story but i'm hooked (good thing you're on FF.net too)
    LUV UCHIHACEST!!!

    you said you needed a beta; well i don't trust myself enough to correct grammar errors (english is not my native language) but i'm willing to help you whith te storyflow or give you some ideas when you can't think of anything...

    well, just think about it and please update sometime again!

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  • From arabuzumaki on July 29, 2009
    omg! this is surely a favourite of mine now. i love how these four have come together. truely great. i hope you continue. i would love to see how each of them gets their mate. and how the future will be for them. i really really love their little family.
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  • From on October 14, 2008
    your story is really good hope you find a beta. hope the plan works and they are successful in starting their family. love your writing style very interesting and keeps me in stitches from laughing. interesteed to see how it goes with itachi gaara heck all of them lol.
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  • From on October 14, 2008
    chap. 3 oh what a fiasco at the store, that perve an all those items. this is to much i was cracking up.
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  • From on October 14, 2008
    lol chap two even better. Does this mean we like men lol. how do we get laid without getting killed lol love your humor
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  • From on October 14, 2008
    awesome first chap. to bad they didn't know what they were getting into. lol.
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  • From Raholea on October 14, 2008
    well, plots and plans going into enacting time.
    and darlin' if you need a general beta, at least for this story, tag me (email addy is in my profile) and i'll see what i can do to help out. no promises, but email me and we can talk about what ya need. i'm a full time mom so i'm only really offering for just a project or two at a time. *winks* but i like this story and i'm more than willing to offer a helping hand if i can be of any help for ya. *waves* looking forward to the next chappie!!
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  • From KiaraNxiar on October 14, 2008
    It's an interesting read. I can't wait to read the next chapters. Is there going to be any lemon? Wish the last chapter was longer. I wonder how Lee and Sasuke going to get laid with Neji and Itachi. Can you include their lemons? That would be great.
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  • From mrk33 on October 14, 2008
    “It has worked miracles on my knees too!” Naruto says happily,
    “They were so rough before, now they’re as soft as my ass.”

    Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From trystkinkou on October 13, 2008
    Yay an update! I've been waiting with baited breath and here you bring me a delicious treat!. If no one else offers, I'd be willing to Beta for you.
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  • From Strailo on October 13, 2008
    I'll do it. send an e-mail to my e-mail above. *nods* *smiles* I like your story, I really do.
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  • From Eremi22 on July 26, 2008
    This is sounding great!! I a very excited at the prospect of encountering a miniature Neji with Lee's eyebrows *squeals*
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  • From lilkkjo082004 on July 25, 2008
    wow that was good..plz plz continue
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  • From navajo on July 24, 2008
    i love this story i cant wait to the alpha's are confronted.
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  • From LunakaWren on July 24, 2008
    O.O

    I think I used to work with that guy...

    Aw, bless their little innocent minds!

    Update soon please!
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