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Reviews for Read the Fine PrintChapter OneHow it Began

By : YaoiSmutMaster
  • From trystkinkou on July 24, 2008
    *snicker**snicker* You haven't failed to provide another entertaining chapter. I can just SEE all the havoc the boys did in the store. LOL! *holding stomach* It hurts soooo good.
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  • From on July 23, 2008
    Wow, that store owner has some balls to ask them to do that! They probably could have just tied him up for being a pervert and taken what they'd wanted anyway! They sure had lots of fun in that store though and got all kinds of goodies! Very funny chapter!
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  • From Dragon7 on July 23, 2008
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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  • From nekluvshp on July 23, 2008
    OMG!!! That was hilarious and awesome. I can't wait to read more; much, much more. I think I'm most excited for the NejiLee pairing than any of the others. Especially since Lee is not exactly Neji's favorite person in the world. ItaSasu, what an awesome pairing!!!!
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  • From Raholea on July 23, 2008
    *chuckles* i waited until you had more than one chapter and some reviews before reading this and i must say i have enjoyed what you have up. i love the pairings, and i totally like the humour/ angst you're building. and i'd so love to see a shot of the four guys in front of the stand... totally amusing but hot, i'm sure!!
    anyways, good luck and write more! thanks for the lurvly story!!!
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  • From Onikage on July 23, 2008
    OMG.....!! I Cannot believe how many times I actually laughed during this! The mix of Humor, inuenduos, and future problems.. O.O YIKES!!!

    I love the pairings, and really, not that I've read this far, I couldn't see it any other way. I think Gaara and Neji will be the most excepting, (though Neji's clan will throw a fit.) but I can't wait to see what drama unfolds before them, and with Shino, and of course, the Uchihas!

    Great story, and i'll be watching! Update soon!
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  • From solitare1 on July 23, 2008
    I haven't laughed so hard in a long time...my face hurts now! Are you on FF.net, cause if you are I want to favorite you and have auto updates!!! I don't want to miss a chapter of this story. You are very talented and have a great sense of humor!!
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  • From on July 18, 2008
    Another great chapter! At least they aren't jumping into this without thinking and are making plans. Are they going to find a way to leave the village without becoming missing nin? I'm sure if Tsunade knew all the facts then she could send them on a 'long term mission' or something. Having Hunter Nin after them would really suck! Plus Kiba needs to get Akamaru!
    I'm looking forward to reading more!
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  • From Dragon7 on July 16, 2008
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I've never read a story like this one before and I have to give it up to you for coming up with such a unique idea. I'm really looking forward to your next update!!

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  • From trystkinkou on July 16, 2008
    Hehehehe... oh assuredly, this can't help but bring a chuckle to my day. This has brightened up a very bad week. Thank you. I was almost thinkin gItachi would be with Naruto since that's even more suicidal, but Sasuke will be a far better choice. LOL.
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  • From mrk33 on July 16, 2008
    I am sooooooooo looking forward to the next chapters. Perfect pairings.
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  • From LunakaWren on July 16, 2008
    Wow. Sasuke as a parent...god help the poor little ones.

    *Snort* I can see miniture Lees with long hair running around yelling YOUTH already.

    wish it had been GaaLee though...but he and Naruto go well to.

    Wait...does this mean that Kiba/Shino's kids will have teeny tiny dogs running around inside them O.o
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  • From trystkinkou on July 10, 2008
    MWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dying of laughter* Oh man it hurts! HEHEHEHHEHEHEE... PLease add more soon, this is soo sweet to read! I can't wait to see who each thought of. ^__^
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  • From on July 10, 2008
    This is so horribly wrong and yet so freaking funny! What idiots to have done all that without realizing that there would probably be consequences. Sasuke can no longer refer to himself as a genius and the others weren't ones to begin with!
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  • From mrk33 on July 10, 2008
    Refreshing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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