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By : Sylvir
  • From LoganCimone on January 26, 2012
    Lovely story, one thing all your "guilts" were turned to "quilts ". And yes that was a short chapter but after a bit of writers block its way better than nothing. ~looks doe eyed towards the horizon~ and now I wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - no one on November 14, 2010
    (It’s not about just fucking him anymore. I’m starting to like him more than a friend.”)

    In one chapter you wrote that Naruto was starting to like Sasuke more than just a friend and then a couple of chapters later you wrote: (He didn’t like Sasuke but who knew)


    So does he like Sasuke or doesn't he??? There is not a single character in this story that i like. Just because you're writing sasuke fucked up and angsty doesn't mean you had to write all your other characters with great big character flaws and fucked up.

    I prefer fun stories- not stories that continue to assault the characters and thus the reader with angst and physical and emotional trauma. So I'll just stop reading now. Thanks for sharing- i'm sure there's lots of people who enjoy this kind of stuff.
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  • From on November 06, 2010
    such an awesome story :) and hope for some more updates but still awesome :p
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  • From ANON - gwyllion on June 18, 2010
    Oh yay!!! An update!!! I absolutely love this fic and was so happy to see this new chappie. The relationship between Sasuke and Naruto is so cute. I hope everything will come to light with Sasuke since I'm curious about what has happened in his past. This is getting too exciting. I feel bad for Neji too...

    Have you ever hear of YaoiGallery.net? There are a lot of amazing writers and artists to get inspiration from if you ever come across writers' block. I get artistblock from time to time and YG's my drug. :)
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  • From ANON - ADeathlyPale on June 04, 2010
    I am so glad you updated! I had been waiting for awhile on this story but I gave up thinking you quit working on it.
    Can't wait to see your next update! :D
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  • From ANON - Sasuke_uchiha_uke on June 04, 2010
    hiya, I'm at chapter 8 and read through your notes, and thought I might help out a bit. You see, I see a psychiotrist every other week.

    they do have lobies and the patients can interact with eachother. It's useually very quiet though. And psychiatrists do NOT push things, if someone says 'I don't want to talk about it' there is the usually 'why don't you want to talk about it?' but it is left alone until the patient choses to bring it up. You were spot on with Sasuke being drained afterwards, sessions can be hard, and can be draining. A good psychiatrist will work very hard to become friends with their patients, not neccesarily outside of the office, but they try to get that kind of relationship to make talking so much easier.

    and with the report. Even a court apointed psychiatrist would not give such a detailed repot. Saying Sasuke is doing better is one thing, but adding in personal information such as friends and school life is actually against the law. Doctor patient confidentiality you see.

    Even if you don't use this information, I thought you might like to know and am happy to share this with you. And by the way, you write beautifully, I'm addicted to this story to tell the truth ^.^
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  • From ANON - Rave on June 04, 2010
    OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!
    I'm soooo glad that you are back and this is continued!
    Well, I felt sorry for Neji
    AND NaruSasu fluff and more to come that I cannot wait
    THANXXXX
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  • From ANON - Dragon on June 01, 2010
    Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing this story again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Greyspell on June 01, 2010
    YAAAAYYYY!!!! I'm sooo glad your alive!!! I love this story and, despite your earlier author's notes, had actually thought you had abandoned the story. And now it's back!!! I also have to admit this is my favourite out of all your stories. The Challenge just has a certain spark in it that I think the others lack, not that they're not good, they are, I just like this one best. And now its being updated. HOORAY!!!! Update again soon?? For your loving fans??? For me?? Greyspell xxx ^_^ YAY!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2010
    Hi there welcome back. I've been keeping an eye on this story from the beginning and I am glad you are back working on it. I was a bit surprised to hear you say you are upset with the nejigaara protion of this story, taking up time and space in the plot. I think it adds depth to the story and it does not distract from the main pair of narusasu. I hope you keep them in the story and help them work out thier relationship. Anyway thanks for the update I just thought I'd let you know that you have a nejigaara fan here, and that I think the story is great as it is developing....so anyway yeah good stuff.
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  • From ANON - Michael on March 01, 2010
    It makes me sad that you don't really update this that often. I have been keeping up with this story for a long time. :[ Though I do understand when life keeps you busy. Update when you can. I'll be following this story til the very end. :D
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  • From melodyz07 on February 03, 2010
    I like your story!
    Please update!
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  • From shinimaxwell on May 15, 2009
    i wonder why you put this on AFF?
    anyway,i love this fic!i love narusasu!
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  • From ANON - skyryuu on May 14, 2009
    I've read many fanfics and I must say this is one of the few for a high school setting that keep me wanting more. More and more is added to the story and there are twists and turns, some darkness in the story, too, which I always like, which makes things even more interesting. The only things that I find hurt the story though, are spelling errors and incorrect use of the word 'then' for 'than'. the word 'definitely' is also spelled 'defiantly' a number of times in the chapters, which is also wrong. I have time to fix all these if that's fine. For a number of authors, it's kind of rare for only one easily fixable flaw to tarnish their stories. Usually they have more than one problem. This story only has this problem I've seen so far. Please keep writing; I'm hot to see what happens.
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  • From tawanawelch on May 01, 2009
    YES!!! Bout time Itachi came around although not completely. I like he is still a bit worried about Sasuke's well being in the fact that he still doesnt quite know Naruto. He is trying and i love it. Sasuke's one completely changed person and thats exciting too. He is adorable in this fic and not the same ol same ol from other fics. I cant wait for the drama with the bad guys. LOL
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