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By : Sylvir
  • From asm613 on November 20, 2008
    (((.” Looking over momentarily he poked his brother in the arm softly)))___You should have used this opportunity to use a habit that is part of Naruto canon---Itachi always poked his younger brother in the center of his forehead. I'm enjoying the story so far. Thanks for taking the time to write and share it with us.
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  • From asm613 on November 20, 2008
    (((“I thing she has a crush on him.” They both got up and started toward their first class. “They make a cute couple if you think about it. Both of them are shy and keep to themselves all the time. In fact I don’t think she has any friends)))___So Neji thinks his cousin Hinata and Sasuke make a cute couple. He also says that Sasuke is basically her only friend. Hinata also has a crush on Naruto. So why would Neji allow Naruto to try and seduce her only friend away from her. Made worse because the one taking her only friend away from her is her crush and her cousin Neji's friend. I would think Neji would ask Naruto to not try anything with Sasuke-because it could hurt his cousin Hinata.
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  • From ANON - Shii-chan on November 20, 2008
    Ok, you did pretty well for a therapist scene! Actually, I've been to two different types of therapists, a psychologist, who recommended I see a psychiatrist. -The reasons will not be divulged!- If you need details on them, just send me an e-mail at fireprincess59@yahoo.com.

    And, to be truthful, a lot of the therapists have waiting rooms where the patients sit down and, well, wait. There, they can talk with each other and tell each other what's going on. They can even divulge information about their situations. At my psychologist's office there was always this couple with two boys that I used to talk to, and they told me every little detail about their lives. I was crying before I got back into the rooms. T.T

    Like I said, if you want the information just e-mail me. My years at the psychologist are a little bit fuzzier than the psychiatrist, since I haven't seen my psychologist in over two years now. However, I'm pretty sure that what ever information you need, I can give.
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  • From ANON - colgate on November 20, 2008
    great XD x x x
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  • From on November 19, 2008
    I love Girl, Interrupted. One of my favourite movies! Just had to say that.

    Anyway, I'm interested to see what's going to happen next. Glad to see you updating again. I really feel kind of sorry for Sasuke. He's so clueless and brittle. Poor dear. I kind of want to smack Naruto for being such... a typical guy. But maybe he'll feel something a lot more tangible for Sasuke eventually? I can only hope! Update soon!


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  • From Aikotina on November 19, 2008
    w00t! loved it! never been to a therapist? coulda fooled me. You described the room and the conversations pretty well. you had a bit too much of anko leading sasuke. my therapist usually just stared at me until i started talking. haha. but the toys and the couches and stuff are all there. i used to draw too when i went to therapy. nothing interesting, just to keep my attention focused. mmm did i mention this was like 2 years ago? (my senior year in high school) gah i'm such a loser! haha. *cough* anyway. the lobby scene is actually practical. i sat in the lobby with other patients too; though none of them ever talked to me. some lady glared at me once. heh. bad guy is... orochimaru? he's such a perv. haha. yeeeaaahh. naruto is such a space-case. doesn't he realise his own feelings for sasuke? and sasuke, he should avoid talking about naruto to itachi. if he's as fond of naruto as anko describes, itachi is sure to pick up on that real quick. sooo, like i said, loved it! and take your time updating, god knows i haven't updated for several months. i'll be ready to read when you post! ^-^ ::heart::
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  • From Management on November 04, 2008
    YAY! I seem to start all my reviews with that... Mhhh, I'll have to find something more original...
    Oh, sorry, but this is like my tenth review tonight, and I think I started all of them with YAY... Except one which was something along the words of WHAT THE FUUUUCK? But yeah.
    Okay, so... HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO US! YOU'RE LIKE TELLING THE STORY IN ADVANCE!!!! Sorry, but I made the mistake of reading the notes at the end where, not only do we find out Hinata is going to try and help Naruto, but that Neji is also after Naruto. You have to stop ruining the suspense and all of that. Seriously.
    ANd I agree this chapter didn't have much in it. Oh well, it's always nice to have a new chapter. And it's well written anyway, so pleasant to read...
    And we got to see naruto being all sentimental, and Sasuke jerking off, and being very confused at what he wants apparently... He realises that if he hooks Hinata and Sasuke up, it won't just get Itachi off his back, but it'll take Naruto away from him, right?
    Okay, well, It's late and I'm tired and this is becoming long, so...
    Can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope you still want to finish this story and update quickly!
    XD LANE
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 31, 2008
    Excellent job! Thank you for updating in such a timely manner, please do so again when you have the opportunity.
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  • From fadezaway on October 31, 2008
    This is one of my favorite stories. I love seeing updates^^ Sasuke making the bento was sweet. I hope he and Naruto can get a kiss soon, I'm as anxious as Naruto is, I think! lol
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  • From Jurple on October 31, 2008
    great story i love the background info on the siblings its very cute and sweet in that sense. Also i can really relate to Itachi in a sense im the old sister and teachers and guildence counselers always give me weird looks when i attend parent teacher nights.Great story !!!
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  • From goodluckbadtimes on October 30, 2008
    awesome chapter!!
    i can't wait to see Hinata helping them get together
    update soon please
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  • From ANON - colgate on October 30, 2008
    :)

    GREAT chapter ... ooo hinatas gonna help naruto eyy? >:P

    update soon x x x
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  • From ladygizarme on October 30, 2008
    I'm really loving this story! I think the way you're portraying Sasuke, and Itachi's treatment of Sasuke, are really good and well thought out. I love this Sasuke. He is totally cute. The hug he gave Naruto was supersweet! And so was the bento the next day! Kyaa! And for some reason I really like that you have Sasuke masturbating to the memory of hugging Naruto, of his own volitiion. Ah, poor misguided Sasuke.. I can't wait to see how their conversation about Hinata's addition to their tutoring session goes... (and I'm glad to know you're determined to finish this story, because it is awesome and it would suck if it was left unfinished)

    Looking forward to the next update!

    ~ lg
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  • From Management on October 22, 2008
    I'm glad you got whatever problems you were having sorted out... I always feel bad for being annoyed at people for not updating, and then realising that they had a very good reason for it...
    Anyway, I'm glad you updated.
    Poor Naruto... He has no more smokes! No, that isn't what I wanted to say, but I couldn't resist XD Loved that line by the way!
    Yeah, he seems sad...
    Gaara wasn't in this chapter. Well, not really... =( although, now I recall he's pretty scary in this story...
    Sasuke got a bit of nerve! I feel sorry for Itachi though. I mean, the fact that he has so many problems to keep Sasuke...
    Anyway... I can't wait for your next update! And I'm glad to hear you're not abandonning this fic. Because I hate people abandonning fics as much as you do!
    XD LANE
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  • From ANON - Chibi_jubjub on October 22, 2008
    WOW!
    i read this as it came out and was like WOOOOOOOOO and i got really upset when i thought you had abandened it but you havent.
    i am exceptionally happy!
    i hope you update soon, and continue the story to the same calibre.
    thank you for not abandoning the story.
    xoxo
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