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Reviews for Never Before Noticed...

By : LydiaEddins
  • From JigokuDayu on December 14, 2017

    This was a lot of fun to read! Hot and very moving! And the twist with the bodyguard's identity was good!


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  • From auronsgirlfriend on December 22, 2008
    cool! at least you didn't forget the story that all that matters to me!
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  • From madness101 on November 14, 2008
    this is a fantastic story and the only one that i have found that seems to be not only in character but a totally likely scenario for these to pair up and to continue their work while remaining seemingly heartless. 5 stars for this and please continue whenever you get the chance! Also feel free to add a nice lemon if you see fit because it would top my day to read something so wonderful thanks for creating something so rare :)
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  • From Charoum on October 13, 2008
    We Love It If Your Authors Note Comes To Life....cause that would be really really fucking HAWT
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on October 02, 2008
    Thanks for posting this. you never see too much of this pairing! to me they make a lovely couple. :)
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  • From IntHellsing on October 02, 2008
    I demand an apology in the form of an epilogue where a certian long-haired pretty boy gets his virginity taken away by a certain masked ninja. XDD
    Seriously. There isn't enough of this pairing... and this was too cute to let end so quickly.
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  • From CanadianGinger on July 10, 2008
    I think you should definitely continue this story. There is not enough Zabuza/Haku stories out there! :) I can't wait for you to update.
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  • From Elli on July 09, 2008
    Zabuza/Haku is one of those forgotten pairings, one of the sadder ones, because there actually is so much evidence from the manga to draw on and build their relationship, whether it be sexual or otherwise. That, coupled with the fact that your fic was very well written, makes it exactly my cup of tea.

    I like the way you write. Really, it doesn't get any simpler than that. There are many writers who struggle between using too much and not enough detail, and a few talented ones who can find the balance in between. You happen to be one of those. :3 I expected the transitions to be a little jerky since nothing much happened in this chapter, but it flowed surprisingly well and made for pleasant reading.

    You've done Haku's character justice; I thought the line about him wearing flowers because a ninja's life was not beautiful to be spot on. We haven't seen much of Zabuza's characterization yet, but I especially liked that you retained his most basic personality - he IS self-serving, regardless of whether he cares for Haku or not.

    I'm definitely looking forward to more (can't wait, really. ;) and I hope you continue along the pace you've set. I'd like to see a hint of a plot, maybe, and more Zabuza and Haku interaction, of course. x3

    Thank you for the good read and keep writing.

    Much love,

    Ella
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  • From Raholea on July 09, 2008
    hmm... i would definitely have to see a second chapter, before drawing a good conclusion on the opinion of your story. you're building it up well and it's got lots of potential. i love pretty little Haku, i was positively convinced he was a she until i saw the actual few moments where he corrected Naruto over the same assumption. your Haku is definitely catching for me. *grins*

    wish to see more, please!!
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  • From darkninja666 on July 09, 2008
    I love your style, I love the pairing, and I love the interaction between them and all that lies between the lines ;) Please continue!
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