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Reviews for Kouingan - The Seduction Eye

By : Slyfer101
  • From Cyraxr on August 13, 2008
    I was reading Kouingan again and thought maybe you should add one of the filler girls. I am not sure what her name is but she is the female ninja bee handler from the "The Search for the Rare Bikochu Beetle" mission. I am putting the thought here because with Naruto's Kouingan that it would be easier to get her in but it is perfectly do able in both stories and at least I think she is hot. By the way I have read both Kouingan and Slaves of the Maelstrom several times already so please keep up the good work with both of them. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2008
    this story is totally awesome
    update soon
    like now
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  • From UzumakiIno on August 12, 2008
    Very nice! Sakura wearing G-strings, Hinata feeling herself up in front of her family, and more! Keep it coming!
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  • From Clover on August 10, 2008
    Really well done! I love the way you wrote the Kyuubi, and how you kept Haku alive! In fact, i don't think there's anything i don't like in this! Please update soon, I can't wait to find ut where this is going. Thanks for writing, it's been a pleasure to read :)
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  • From skeeve on August 07, 2008
    This story is fantastic! The creative way you have manipulated the Naruto story line, makes this one of the best Naruto fan fics I have read. I cant wait for new chapters.
    Skeeve
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  • From Chronostorm on August 07, 2008
    Hmm you made it an A-class secret with that kind of punishment i can't help but think that is a rule that you made to be broken by somebody by accident and duh it hit Hinata that strong she has a crush on him but they don't quite relize that yet do they ;) i like how you made the collar but i think they would have been able to make them with leather oh well and ya i will ask to try and include Shion at some point and man Hinata loves those eyes that cause her to beg
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  • From Anttolas on August 06, 2008
    i really really enjoy this story damn fun and exciting hope you keep writing good and long chapters, an i just wonder if you could reply that it is a pairing of NAruto/Haku/Hinata ion this story if you wrote it somewhere i must have missed it so see ya next chapter
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  • From on August 05, 2008
    Interesting story you got here, and a unique twist although it is kind of like the other story you got up I just hope you make enough differences so they aren't too similar. Well I see that Haku is getting into things, and I wonder what will happen when Hinata is left alone with Naruto for their training. Plus I can't wait to see him use it on Sakura as well, since they will be training too I can't wait to see them together as well. I do see a future problem with the clans as a new bloodline ability shows up. Although since it's a harem fic I get the feeling you'll have Naruto basically married off to one member of each powerful clan just to keep them all happy. As for the last chapter it wasn't too bad, you put in some nice little background there that was needed anyway.
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  • From Anonymous7 on August 05, 2008
    I'm really enjoying these two stories you're working on. I'm surprised Naruto didn't stop Haku from calling herself a slave and things like that; I expected him to be very adamant that she be treated like a person, even if only by the people who know his secret at the moment. I'm guessing Hinata was so strongly affected because of her attraction to Naruto, and not because of the Byakugan. Of course, if they try it on Hanabi they'll say it's because she's too young, and if they try it on Hiashi he'll say he's too strong-willed, so Hinata will have to come clean if they want to know the truth. Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter of this story; how the Kouingan evolves, what Naruto learns, Hinata losing some inhibition, and maybe a little lemony goodness. See you then!
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  • From DragonMan220 on August 05, 2008
    Hinata volunteering to be Naruto's practice dummy is awesome! I can't wait to see how these sessions make her turn out. If she's more confident and able to hold her own I won't mind. Will Naruto have a threesome with Hinata and Haku????
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  • From Jin on August 05, 2008
    So gald to see more if this. I can't wait for the NaruHaku goodness in the next installment. Update soon!
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  • From KaelHyun on August 05, 2008
    Vary cool
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 05, 2008
    SPICE NOTHING!!! THROW HER IN! Ahem I mean, I like hinata and naruto stories very much and I like the idea of bakyugan and koreingan mixing into something very new. Besides I think Haku wouldn't mind sharing him. I like the idea of new techniques in the jyuken style will you be focusing on striking areas to cause pain or pleasure? Or even cause paralysis or unconsciousness? You have alot of open doors of ideas to look through and I can't wait to see which one you step into. SO KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND THANK YOU FOR THE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on August 05, 2008
    Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one update soon.
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  • From firelordeg on August 05, 2008
    you may not be happy with the chapter but i feel you did a great job on it i really got a laugh at the end with the way hinata said she would volunteer please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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